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Post by perfumeheaven on 2013-06-07, 22:24

Hello QH Folks this is my First WU please tolerate any errors cheers
Qubool Hain- Written Update - 7th June 201
Haseena’s residence
Ayan is shocked at such cruelty shown towards his mother. He goes towards chandbi but she slams the door closed. Ayan in very angry,he threatens to break down the door, if she doesn't open it. Shirin reprimands ayan for being so harsh, and she feels helpless and doesnot know what to. She becomes very angryand starts blaming him for everything that went wrong. He tries to console her, but she jerks away from him, she says that she doesn't want him close to her and she leaves. Ayan is pissed off now and threatens once again to break the door, if it is not opened, and goes into a tantrum around breaking pots around him. Chandbi calls razia and reports his actions. Razia is very pleased that her wicked plan is working, the insults thrown at shirin and Ayan's anger would make him her slave for life, which she desires. As Ayan was about to leave, he sees the car parked, in which they had gifted to imran. Unmindful about the situation that ocurred, Imran gets into the car, without Ayan seeing him. Ayan locates a match and fuel and lits the car afire.


Asad’s residence
Pammi is ready with her photographer for the photo shoot of the would- be married couple. Pammi requests for zoya's presence. Everyone awaits zoya’s arrival, asad wonders if Zoya would wear the dress that he gifted her. As zoya opens the door and approaches everyone, asad is surprised to see zoya in a red outfit. Zoya is happy that she has dressed in the way asad wants her to, asad is disappointed that she didnt wear his gift. Zoya is complimented on how beautiful she looks, while asad is clearly upset. The shoot starts, with zoya and asad standing facing each other. The photographer positions them, according to the demands of the pics, in the pictures poses they were placed intimately against each other. While zoya is enjoyning the shoot, asad gets angry. The photographer asks for a dress change, and asad starts to wonder why doesn't zoya wear the dress he gave her.

Zoya comes wearing something else, again Asad is infuriated and hurt, he questions himself about why is he bothered by it. When the photographer asks what colour should zoya wear for the next shoot, asad answers white,before zoya could respond. He regains his composure and defends his choice of colour by saying that it would suit the background. Zoya is surprised while others are amused. She is insecure but goes to change anyway.
While zoya is changing, dilshad agrees that Zoya indeed looks very beautiful in white, asad is happy(MITWA MOMENT) Asad turns around happily, thinking that she’s finally wearing what he gave her, but she disappoints him again. He is distraught. Pammi compliments zoya's beauty. Eventually the shooting session ended and asad was very upset. zoya eventually leaves in a haste puzzling asad.
Asad follows Zoya into her room, and queries her about not wearing the dress and asks her if she didnot like it, Zoya says that it was very beautiful and asad asks her so why didn't you wear it? He says that it is Zoya who is emotionally challenged and she does not care about how other people feels. Zoya asks what does he feels. Asad fumbles once again , and zoya tells him to leave it since he is unable to speak about it. Zoya says that she didnt know he wanted her to wear it and he asks her why would he give it to her, if he didnot want her to wear it. Zoya asks that he wants to see her in the dress, she turns and leaves to change in the bathroom.

Ayan’s residence
Rashid consoles Nikhat that whatever happened was possibly for the good and she should not be feeling so distraught at all. He says that he knows that she loves Imran a lot, and can do anything for him, but the question right now, does Imran love her. She says that she knows in her heart, that he does. Rashid says that Imran will return and their love would stand the test of time, and Imran will defend her against his family and come to her, and then they would never be separated again. Nikhat looks at rashid with hope

Shirin comes walks in side her home, she is oblivious to to everyone'. Shirin recalls chandbi’s words, and locks herself inside the room. Nikhat,nuzrat and humaira are very become disturbed. Shirin starts to look into the almirah and everywhere else, searching for something. she finally takes out a knife, thinking that it would serve its purpose. Rashid questions the girls. Badi bi too comes. Razia shouts to open the door, or else shirin would so something drastic. As ayan reaches home,he hears of the commotion, and comes running inside the house. He starts force the door open by slamming against it and begs shrin to open the door.

Asad’s residence
As zoya comes out of the bathroom, wearing the sleeveless dress, and donning a dupatta, covering her naked arms, asad gives a seering look. (MITWA MOMENT) He comes to her, and asks why didnts he wear this before. She takes off the dupatta, and tearfully shows her right arm, with disfigured with horrendous burn scars and indicated this is the reason. She says that she doesnt know when and how she got the scars.


Asad recalls zennats words, and zoya says that there’s some connection withn the scars and her dreams, where everything is on fire, and her mother trapped in it.She says that she always hid her scars. As she begins to drape the dupatta back, to hide her scarred wounds, asad stops her he holds her hand, he tells her that she doesnt need to hide anything, as she’s very beautiful with scars and all.

Zoya is overwhelmed hearing him say this. She gets teary-eyed and he lovingly caresses her cheeks.

The screen freezes on their faces.

Precap: As tanveer comes out of the bathroom, with her stone eye uncovered by lens, she is shocked when she finds zoya coming in her room. Zoya too is equally shocked to see tanveer with her stone eye. Zoya says that now I would reveal her secret in front of everyone.






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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by pollyanna on 2013-06-07, 22:28

Thanks for the wonderful update Zainab Thumbsup

Loved the way u explained the scenes, an eye to the detail...... cheers




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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by perfumeheaven on 2013-06-07, 22:46

Thanks Pallu, you know I am not as good as you are. After posting it I saw so many errors,I will improve as time goes :)

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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by pollyanna on 2013-06-07, 22:55

perfumeheaven wrote:Thanks Pallu, you know I am not as good as you are. After posting it I saw so many errors,I will improve as time goes :)

Zainab dear...u did an excellent work bounce ..the scenes are so well written that one doesnt even need to watch the episode :) ...and as far as typos are concerned.....that happens in our work life too darling so just dont bother about them at least here in Dhwani..... Wink


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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by Tanthya on 2013-06-07, 23:03

Brilliant Write up, Zai ... each and every words brought the scene in front of the eyes ...

You are already a Pro, Sweetheart !!! do not feel shy.. You have done a expert job..

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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by perfumeheaven on 2013-06-07, 23:04

Tanthya wrote:Brilliant Write up, Zai ... each and every words brought the scene in front of the eyes ...

You are already a Pro, Sweetheart !!! do not feel shy.. You have done a expert job..

Awww,thanks Tants :)

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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by Shesherkobita on 2013-06-07, 23:50

Fantastic job Zai... Loved every bit of it...
Loved Zoya taunting Asad about the dress..
What a touching moment it was when Asad saw the scar... Heart
Ayan's in big trouble... Who made that video? razia ?

From the update it's hard to believe you are not a native Hindi speaker and you watch QH with subtitles....kudos!

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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by perfumeheaven on 2013-06-08, 00:08

Thanks Sab, I guess body language and facial expressions are better indicators on how far our feelings go. I must commend the actors and actresses for bridiging that language barrier. If they were not good at acting then I would have been in trouble.
I am learning some hindi though,some dialogues are repetitve and common.So I would be able to quote like you,Pallu,Anu,sham,Manu (rhymes doesn't it?)

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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by --sumana13-- on 2013-06-08, 00:38

Hey Zainab !!.. great update buddy .. keep writing .. loved to read you yaara

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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by perfumeheaven on 2013-06-08, 00:47

Awww manu you are toooo tweet

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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by --sumana13-- on 2013-06-08, 00:52

perfumeheaven wrote:Awww manu you are toooo tweet


Hugs Zainab .. here are some pics .. you mey paste them into your update yaara

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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by sunshine99 on 2013-06-08, 04:06

Lovely update. :)

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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by zuzana on 2013-06-08, 21:35

Wah loved reading you!

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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by perfumeheaven on 2013-06-09, 00:00

ty ladies :)

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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by aishu30 on 2013-06-09, 10:36

thanks

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Re: ~Qubool Hai -Written Update- 7th June 2013~

Post by sarra0 on 2013-06-09, 19:25

Thanks Zainab for the update, couldn't tell it was your first one, loved the detail.

The moment wen asad sees Zoya's arm and doesn't let her cover it up again was a good scene. Asad impatient to see her in the dress he bought her and him saying white for the last change was sweet

Shrin wat have they done to her.. and ayan he didn't realise wen he was pouring oil on the car that someone was in it?

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