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Qubool Hai: ITS TIME FOR OUR ASAD MIYAH TO GET SOME MORE LESSONS IN LOVE.

Post by Beekay on 2013-06-10, 23:13

This is not an FF just a scenario.



The writers should introduce the jealous
factor…



We did see a minute part of Asad’s
unconcious jealousy during the cricket episode…But then Asad did not understand
that it was jealousy at that time but felt it was because of his stance that
women should not meet with men without a chaperone.



There is too much drama already with Ayaan’s
situation… So to let that sink in with the audience…they should lighten the
mood at Asad’s place… (You see they can’t lighten the mood at Ayaan’s place)
and they do the same when the tension builds up in Asad’s place.



The writers should introduce a new
character… this time a male… maybe Asad’s good friend from the “abroads” or it could be a very good childhood friend of
Zoyas whom she had lost touch with for a long time but bumped into each other
in Bhopal and Zoya invited him to her wedding



The new character being Asad’s friend (Lets
call him Aarib) would be a better option and more fun…



Now Aarib is quite the opposite of Asad
(not like Ayaan… Ayaan is kiddish charming) but Aarib is very charming, witty,
and also very observant.




Aarib notices that Tanveer and Asad’s
chummy, touching relationship. He also notices the look of hurt that flashes
across Zoya’s face everytime this happen and how she does or says something
silly to anger Asad.



Aarib confronts Asad with this observation.



Aarib: “Asad, I thought you are engaged to Zoya and Aunty had mentioned that
the decision was yours. Do you have more feelings for Tanveer than you have for
Zoya? What is your relationship with her?”



Asad is shell-shocked. He snaps out of it
and angrily:”Aarib, are you nuts?
Tanveer is a very good childhood friend of mine. And currently she is going
through a bad phase. So all I’m doing is supporting”.



Aarib: “Are you sure that it is all that is. That’s not how it looks for a
person who’s looking on from the outside.”



Asad then recalls Zoya’s statement (The dance
master episode)



Aarib cuts into Asad’s thoughts: “Is Zoya ok with this?



Asad: “Zoya…
Zoya acts childish all the time.



Aarib: “Is that so, my friend. Is that all that you have noticed? Have you noticed
the look of hurt on Zoya’s face whenever you are extra pally with Tanveer but
you ignore Zoya, when you and Tanveer hold hands and not Zoyas, whenever you
hug Tanveer and not Zoya. She does a
good job of covering it before anyone notices it. She hides it behind what you
call childish acts. I’m sorry for you,
man. You are a lucky man. You have a woman who is beautiful not just from the
outside but also from the inside and who loves you. Appreciate her before its
too late, man… before its too late



Aarib walks away. Asad is shocked…


Asad should be seen watching his friend on
first name basis with Zoya and not liking it.



He should see Zoya always smiling when she’s
around Aarib and when Asad walk into the room, she stops smiling. Asad starts
to get jealous. He should be seen trying to crack a joke which shocks all of
them except Aarib. Aarib should just burst out laughing. Asad should walk away
in embarrassment. Zoya should be seen running after him.



Zoya: “Mr
Khan… the joke was very cute and funny. Mr. Khan… Just that you… joke… aadat
nahi hai na
” and she touches his hand to show she means it. Asad turns
looks at her and smiles. (can throw in a mitwa moment here)



He should be seen constantly rushing to
stand by Zoya’s side whenever Aarib is around.



Asad should see Aarib being mesmerized by
Zoya’s smile and Asad should remember the bhang scene about Zoya’s killer as
stated by Zoya and this would upset Asad some more
J,


Dilshad and Najma observes that Asad is
getting jealous of Aarib and Zoya’s comradeship. Dilshad to herself: “It’s a good opportunity to get Asad to
confess to Zoya. I must use this opportunity
”.



Dislhad: “Asad beta, Do you have some time to go the mall. I need you to…


Asad: “Is
it very urgent Ammi? A very important
meeting has cropped up at the office and
I need to rush.



Dilshad: “Koyi baath nayi, Asad


Asad turns and leaves. She then turns to
Aarib and loudly for Asad to hear “Aarib
beta, can Zoya and you go to the mall and pick up something for me”
and she
winks at Aarib.



Aarib catches oo, winks back…



Aarib: “Sure Aunty, any ways I’m doing nothing else here. I was getting bored. Is it ok while we are
there that Zoya and I have lunch together? Maybe I should ask Asad if its ok.”



Zoya butts in. “Aarib,
why should Mr. Khan give me permission. I can decide for myself and I say its
ok



Asad shouts “Ms. Farooqi”. All turn. Then in softer tone “Zoya”. Zoya’s eyes almost pop out. The others smile.


Then Asad to Dilshad still looking at Zoya “Ammi, There is no need to trouble Aarib. I
will take Ms.Fa…. Woh…woh… Zoya to the mall. What is it that you need Ammi



Dilshad: “Asad, but you just said you have a very important meeting…you know
Aarib…



Aarib: “Asad, if its ok with you. I can take Zoya to the mall. You can go ahead
to the office.



Asad in clipped tones: “I did say I would take Zoya to the mall. I
will get to the office after that
”.



Zoya gives Asad a look of pure joy. Asad
sees that smile and gives his famous small smirk. ( a small mitwa moment)



Tanveer walks in just then overhears Asad
saying that he would take Zoya to the mall. Tanveer to herself: “Not if I can
help it”



She walks upto Asad with a smile, places
her hand on Asad’s hand.


Tanveer: “Jammy, may I join Zoya and you to the mall. I need to pick up a few
things myself and with the recent incidents that has happened, I am a nervous
to go there myself
”. She turns to Dilshad. “kaala, is it ok?



Dilshad turns to Aarib with a helpless
look.



Aarib to Tanveer: “Tanveer, I need your help here. Let Asad go with Zoya and I will take
you there later
”.


Asad: “Its
ok, let Tanveer come with Ms Farooqi… I mean, woh… ahem… Zo..Zoya and me
”.





He turns to Zoya to ask her to get ready
and he saw the smile on Zoya’s face fade and a hurt look flash across Zoya’s
face before she could cover it. Asad remembers his conversation with Aarib.
Asad looks at Aarib. Aarib rolls his eyes at Asad, slaps his forehead, shakes
his head and turns to walk away.




Zoya stops him.

Zoya: “Aarib,
wait. I’m not going to the mall. I’ll stay back and help you with whatever you
need to get done. Let Mr. Khan and Tanveer go to the mall together. Mr.Khan
enjoys her company better than
” (Zoya’s voice breaks a little here but she
takes a deep breath and continues. Asad hears that break and he shuts his eyes
in pain…maybe another mitwa moment) “he does
mine after all Tanveer is Mr.Khan’s childhood friend.”


And Zoya looks at Tanveer. Tanveer gives
her a triumphant smile which is noticed by Aarib and then Zoya walks off with
Aarib following her.




Asad stares after Zoya, raises his hand
halfway as-if to stop her…Then Asad continues to stare after Zoya with a look
of frustration.




Tanveer: “Jammy…”



Asad stops her and curtly says: “Not now Tanveer”
and walks to his room slamming the door shut…


Tanveer is left behind with a look of
frustation…


Wouldn’t you all love to see this….

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Post by perfumeheaven on 2013-06-10, 23:24

Beekay, have I ever told you that I just love love love your perspective honey? Your storyline is superb! I agree that there should be another man in the Picture! Asad needs to get jealous and he needs an eye opener.

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Post by pollyanna on 2013-06-10, 23:25

Beekay.....I so want that mall wala situation..... bounce

NOW!!!! :sunny: :heart: Embarassed

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Post by Maria J on 2013-06-10, 23:30

Would love to see this Beekay :)

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Post by Beekay on 2013-06-10, 23:33

Thank you Zai
Thank you Pallavi
Me too... I would the mood lighten a little bit with Asad acting a little childish and Zoya a little grownup-ish... The tables being turned :)

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