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Meri bhabhi: First day First show

Post by Abavi on 2013-06-18, 09:28

Hello people, here is a new show... The show had a moderately good start... with right mix of sentiments, love, comedy, suspense, misery and happiness... This write up is not a written update... Its just a summary of what was shown to us on the first day - first show... its rather a dry update...Hope you all will like it.

So here is the story...

In the city of delhi... There is a happy family...The Shergills....

Mr. Zorawar Shergil is a retired colonel. He and his wife, Amrit are happily married and share a very beautiful relationship. He has three sons (Anand, Ashish and Ishu) and a daughter (Shraddha). Two of his sons are married (Anand to Kirtika and Ashish to Jaya) and the last is going to college. His daughter, Shraddha is married to Bobby and lives in mumbai with her son Dhruv... It is told that Bobby doesnt like his in laws and doesnt allow Shraddha to call them as well. They are also told that Shraddha and Bobby travel a lot with their son all around the world.
Its Mr.Shergil's birthday eve and the family is seen preparing for his birthday. The elder DiL- Kirthika makes a hand made card and gets it signed from everyone in the family. While the family prepares to wish the dad... Dad is seen waiting outside for his daughter's call- to wish him. His wife keeps pulling his leg and he seems upset about his daughter not calling him.
The family finally wishes him and he blesses everyone... They seem to be a happy family. The second DiL seemed a little jealous about the attention the first DiL gets... (Ok there is gonna be Kitchen politics too then...)
Kirtika asks Zor if Shraddha had called, he tells her that she might be in Singapore and should have slept because of zonal difference.

In mumbai, we are also shown Shraddha who prays for her father's happiness and her son Dhruv who reminds her about her father's birthday. They try to reach him, but the call doesnt connect to because of zero balance. Shraddha  seems to have financial issues... She tells Dhruv to record his message and the message would go once the call connects...
Shraddha is shown to make her living by doing a catering service. She has her bills and rents to pay. Her husband is no where to be seen. The next day Shraddha manages to recharge her phone but gets into a small accident and the phone gets crashed by a vehicle in the process.

Her remaining amount is also taken away by her landlord who threatens her that if she doesnt pay the remaining amount by next day, he is going to throw her and her son out of the house. At this point, we are told that Shraddha doesnt live with her Hubby bobby...

She breaks down in misery.  But she is adamant that her parents shouldnt know about her miseries. At Delhi, Kirtika and Anand try to call Shraddha but the call doesnt get connected. Anand tries to reach Bobby but he doesnt respond.

The family wants to celebrate Dad's birthday but Zor is very upset and is missing his daughter. Kirtika and Amrit blackmail him emotionally and bring him out to cut the cake. Zor gets a call finally. Its Shraddha who had tried to reach him finally from a landline...
Alright now that I have given you all a summary of the point where the storyplot has started... a few viewpoints from my side- about the show.

Shraddha- Seems to be a strong lady who wants to fight her won battles. Her married life is not as happy as she had made it appear to her parents... They think that their daughter and Son in Law are happily married... But behind that rosy rosy view that she had given her family, are the throns that she struggles hard to hide...

Kirtika- A happy go lucky, bubbly girl who gets along with everyone in the family. She pretty much knows about each family members thoughts and priority and goes to by it
Jaya- She comes across as a normal girl who wants attention from everyone in the family. Kind of does things to gain that- attention! and may or may not be out of real affection that she feels.

Mrs. and Mr. Shergill- A very contended couple, they are happy in their own world- their only worry is their Daughter. May be they know by instinct that their daughter is not as happy as she lets them know.

The  sons are pretty much playing the role that the male leads and the second leads play usually in SP shows... nothing much to do but keep smiling at their wife and clicking pictures of their wife... Only time will say if Anand has a role to play here or not... The third one looks like a guitar freek.


The plot is catchy for the trps and the cast seems ok too... Hope the show manages to reach good numbers of viewers...

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Re: Meri bhabhi: First day First show

Post by slmu on 2013-06-18, 12:38

Sounds quite nice Vi.. will catch a repeat if I can.

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Re: Meri bhabhi: First day First show

Post by Abavi on 2013-06-18, 13:58

slmu wrote:Sounds quite nice Vi.. will catch a repeat if I can.
Sure Shanthi... Thanks...

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Re: Meri bhabhi: First day First show

Post by zuzana on 2013-06-18, 21:59

Vi looks good ....your writing has def added the required flavours....loved it...keep writing will try catching up

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