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Post by Bloom on 2013-07-18, 04:28

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Post by Shegarf71 on 2013-07-18, 04:47

Loved it loved it loved it dammit!!Short and completely sweet with the edge of aggression and a pinch of naughty!!....Heart 

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Post by Jhalak29 on 2013-07-18, 05:15

Good hai ji... Loved it... Arnav the ever confident one n Khushi the shy one :* emb*:

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Post by Shesherkobita on 2013-07-18, 08:22

This is super cool. Glad they didnt look up. Anjali needs to learn to give space! I always imagined Arshi with kids ... Kinda like the Huxtables ( Cosby show) where Dr. Huxtables was soooo much into his wife that he would kick all the kids out of the room... And they would still keep coming back. Mrs Huxyable, being the mom, was more lenient and would allow them back in their bed... completely pis*ing Huxtable off!

Please write more ... I loved it.

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Post by win7 on 2013-07-18, 09:32

Loved it. Especially the message he sent anjhali.

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Post by reth kumar on 2013-07-18, 09:57

man i just killed me... i believe even my heart forgot to beat.... its been ages since a bit a piece of literature has been so engrossing.....keep going.... n thanx a lot 4 making my day....

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Post by Samantha on 2013-07-18, 12:44

Loved it Areeba :)

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Post by Abavi on 2013-07-18, 13:32

Haiye Haiye... I love OS where Arnav and Khushi are parents... It is like peeping into their peaceful, romantic, perfect life for a change!

post more Areeba... Nice to see that you have started posting your wonderful OSes here!

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Post by Bloom on 2013-07-20, 02:32

 Thanks everyone for their your comments! 


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Post by Hilowbolo on 2013-07-20, 09:42

Hayyye!! Absolutely loved it!! Can't wait for the next one!

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Post by JalebiG on 2013-07-20, 09:48

loved it!!  The cute romance of arhi parents, the teasing, the peace, the love!  Looking forward to your next excerpt!

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Post by sarra0 on 2013-07-21, 13:22

Areeba loved it... was cute and sweet.. im glad he didn't look up and texted Anjali to go away...loved it.

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Post by stutipoddar on 2013-08-05, 00:45

waiting to read it

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Post by roops8201 on 2013-08-27, 14:05

loved it!!!

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