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Post by riti4u on 2013-09-02, 17:48

Note- Hi , dear reader This is my first short story. This work of fiction and its characters are purely my imagination.


I had posted this story in other place -Posting it for members here.I have already completed story but will be posting two chapters at a go so that readers can catch up:) 


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What if the one you live for.. you breathe every second for leaves you alone..to wait an endless wait..It is often easier for those who leave but tougher for those who stay on behind them..in hope of return of their love .. This story is about two characters Meera and Shekhar and their incomplete love stories.. both waiting for their love....Meera's wait is endless..will shekhar end his ?


Prologue
"Tu mujhe chod jaaye yeh nahi ho sakta..
Meri baton mein tera zikr sada
                                               Meri Yaad mein teri fikr sada.."


It was sunny Friday morning.. Meera was getting ready for the day.. She looked into the mirror..
Everything was perfect.. Saree that she wore was his favorite..She had put his favorite cologne. His favorite lip color.. same earrings that he gave her on their first anniversary.. He always loved her hair loose 'she kept her hair the same way the way he liked' Everything on her was his choice' and so was she' As she looked in the mirror, she felt his presence around as if he is watching her..She turned around but room had familiar loneliness..Silence that she had learned to live with..
Meera took her purse lying on bed and walked out of the room. Her Maa was waiting for her at breakfast. She knew it was Friday ..the day which gave meera a hope' only day in the week when she dresses herself up as an angel and walks out of her room..her captivity' Only day when Gayatri Devi , Lady of the house gets to spend some moments with her daughter in law..
"Maa, Good Morning "
"Good morning meera, you are looking beautiful.."
Meera slightly smiled on hearing the compliment. She took her seat next to her Maa and next few minutes passed in awkward silence as both took their meals
"Maa, I am going out today'I might be late ..Dont wait for me at dinner'"
Gayatri knew it was coming but now she had learned to live with this routine
"Sure dear, just take care of yoursel..Don't be too late..It is not safe at late hours"
Meera nodded as she got up and kissed her maa's forehead..
"Don't worry.. "
Gayatri smiled thinking about worries she had and infact is living with each day '. Wishing that meera realizes one day' that those who left them will never again come back'..never ever..

At the other end of city, Shekhar was getting ready for office' He knew'that she will come again in a hope and he will get some time to see her..sometime just to be with her
"Maa, I will be late today'Have some urgent work'Don't wait for me at dinner" said shekhar to his old mother who was busy in her usual household work..
"You will meet her today again right'. " asked his mother..
"I have to go maa'."He left her question unanswered.. He didn't know why he waited for this day.. in a hope..that someday meera will realise.
And then he left his home

Chapter 1

Four years ago


Meera a young enthusiastic girl whose life was surrounded with her friends and family.Being the only girl in her house, She was pampered by her two elder brothers and her parents..Meera was the life of the house.Her chirpy voice and her laughter made every morning in the house a celebration.


"Meera , at least have your breakfast" said meera's mother looking anxiously at meera who was busy in getting ready for her college. Meera knew She was already late and that was as usual..


"No Mom, I cant. Shekhar would be waiting for me..He has to drop me college today..and you know how particular he is about time.. " Meera chuckled and hurriedly ran outside kissing her mother's forehead.


Shekhar was already outside meera's house. A serious man who knew importance of every minute in his life. He knew meera would be late as usual but he didn't mind waiting for her as she was his only friend perhaps and somewhere even more than that . They were both miles apart in nature but yet they knew each other so well. Even they didn't know when and how they became best friends. Though unlike Shekhar, Meera had many friends, she was an extrovert who loved making new friends but still Shekhar was someone whom she connected the most and knew that he is a friend that she can count on throughout her life.
Meera came running to his car and as she came a smile spread across Shekhar's face. Meera opened the door and sat in front seat nearly loosing her breath.


"I know I know..I am very late..I am so so sorry " Meera looked at shekhar apologetically .


But Shekhar gave her slight smile saying "I don't mind waiting for you."


Meera laughed "Let's go before we get ourselves out of class today."


Shekhar started his car and they drove to their engineering college which was quite at a distant from meera's house. On the way meera started her non stop talks on yesterday's events at home..the way she teased her brother Nikhil about his new girlfriend and how she imitated her dad reaction only to be caught by him later. Shekhar enjoyed this drive so much with her and her talks. He often felt like this journey never ends as these were only moments in his life where he could just forget all his worries of life, his responsibilities.He had a lonely childhood being the only son of his mother, his father had left them long ago and married again. What fun it was to have so many relations in your life , he learnt it from meera only.


Soon their journey ended and as Shekhar parked his car, Meera ran in full speed saying -"Will meet you class, have to submit my assignment to physics teacher before she leaves for her class". Shekhar just sighed wishing journey could have been a little longer.
Meera was quite popular in her college. She was an all rounder- good in studies, good in cultural activities , a prankster and one of the prettiest girl in the college. No doubt every boy in the college wanted to be her friend.


It was first day of new semester. Meera and Shekhar reached on time. But as usual Shekhar took first row seat, meera as usual went backseat with her other gang. Everyone got the news of some new students joining as many diploma students joined college in second year. Four of Five new joinees were already in the class and Amit Sir , the class teacher had started marking the attendance and introducing them to the class .

"We have some new inclusions in the class from today , I can see those new faces. Welcome to class students, I was told they were 5 but I can see only 4�where is 5th one."
There he was standing at the door.

"Can I come in Sir.. So Sorry for being late ..My train got a bit delayed.." a soft husky voice came from the door and everyone looked at that direction.


A young tall and handsome boy stood with a confidence on his face and a pleasing smile.

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Re: SS-Waiting for you<3

Post by riti4u on 2013-09-02, 17:49

Please let me know if font size is too small. I will edit it soon...

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Re: SS-Waiting for you<3

Post by pollyanna on 2013-09-03, 15:49

Yup Riti :) :)  its fine...and I am waiting to know who is the 5th one???

Eagerly waiting bounce

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Re: SS-Waiting for you<3

Post by Jhalak29 on 2013-09-03, 18:48

I am eager to catch up:)  the rest

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Re: SS-Waiting for you<3

Post by riti4u on 2013-09-04, 15:38

Thanks for comments polly n Jhalak...:)

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Re: SS-Waiting for you<3

Post by riti4u on 2013-09-04, 15:47

Chapter- 2




A young man stood in the doorway with all curious eyes on him.
"Are you new joinee ", Amit sir broke silence of the class.

"Yes ,Sir, I join this class from today.My Name is Sameer " a husky voice replied from the doorway.
"Oh I see...so you are..."Amit Sir glanced a look in the register''
"Oh right Sameer Mehra....Come in and welcome to the class." Amit Sir replied .
He walked in with a confidence . And things began to change from then onwards



******



Present







"Passenger Name is Sameer Mehra" Meera asked TT on platform.






"Ma'am ,I am sorry but we don't have this name in the list'." TT replied looking over all the names of the passenger who boarded Train which just arrived.


Meera checked the train name and number. It was correct one. Then how it could be.There must be something wrong. He should have been here in this one for sure.It is Friday 4 pm already train arrived on time she was on time. Well she was much before time even when she had visited temple on way and prayed all along ..

"May be TT has missed it.I should see it once myself" Meera thought over a second.

"Can I check the list ..Sir ..If you don't mind." Meera pleaded to TT.

"Ma'am ,I am already getting late.but okay to your satisfaction the passenger list is also available on each compartment itself you can search in that"

Without wasting a second meera scanned through all names..with each name..her heartbeat increasing in a hope of finding that familiar name.. name that entered her life 4 years back .and changed everything once and for all...
So many unfamiliar faces pass through meera as she went from one compartment to another searching for list of passengers ..carrying a hope that was all she had..
Already half an hour had passed..and there was signal for train to leave.. Meera was still checking in last compartment list hoping for a miracle..

At a distance a pair of eyes were following meera's frantic search..Shekhar had arrived few moments ago
He knew her search would have started again .Somewhere in his heart ..he wished if he could just end it for all' He could feel moistness in his eyes.. a pain somewhere seething in his heart seeing how vulnerable she was'He felt helpless but somehow gathered courage to face her..


"Meera..." Shekhar called out ..
Hearing her name..Meera turned back..
"Shekhar, I am so glad you are here...I am so confused...I think I got the train information wrong.. Can u check or confirm with Maa or wait..I will call her and ask for details again.."

"No.. ,the details you have are correct..I already confirmed with Mrs. Mehra.." Shekhar lied..

"Oh.. then what happened ...Why Sameer didn't board this one"

Shekhar didn't have any answer to that question'like always

"Meera  lets go'" Shekhar replied..
"Where?..I can't go right now..He will be here soon "Meera exclaimed..looking shockingly at what Shekhar had said.

"You already checked all names" He replied
"May be he will come next week.. Lets go ..its 4:30 now..and this train would be leaving any second." Shekhar said softly giving her assurance and Trying to be normal ..which was hard though
"But..."Meera's voice got choked.She realized that may be Shekhar was right. He will come next week.She might have heard wrong dates.There must be reason..else her Sameer ..will not do this..especially to her...Meera sighed..

"I want to be alone for a while Shekhar. Just give me some time." Meera trying to be strong but inside she knew'she needed sometime to be alone'.as once again her hopes were dashed..

Shekhar nodded "I will be outside waiting for you.." Words that meant more than their meaning'He only wished that she could understand.
Soon meera was left alone and she looked back to time'when it all started.


******


"Hi , I am sameer.." Sameer extended his hand to meera...who was busy chatting with her friends.
Meera looked at hand extended to her and then that face.There was something about him which was pleasing to eyes.
"Actually Amit Sir had given your name and asked me to check on previous syllabus with you"

"Oh Okay...Hi..Umm...I am Meera... Meera Sharma. " Meera didn't knw why was she feeling so nervous as she extended her hand to meet that hand.
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Re: SS-Waiting for you<3

Post by riti4u on 2013-09-04, 15:49

dont knw why this font is coming so small....n i cant see edit post option here:scratch:

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Re: SS-Waiting for you<3

Post by ..Bubbles.. on 2013-09-13, 12:26

nice start...

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Re: SS-Waiting for you<3

Post by sanghamitra on 2013-09-28, 17:08

Wow!
Very nice..
Thnks fr pm..

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Re: SS-Waiting for you<3

Post by sanghamitra on 2014-01-13, 00:37

Lovd it..

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Re: SS-Waiting for you<3

Post by Smily on 2014-06-25, 23:46

Cool one but what ever u start u leave it in d middle r what no continuation.

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