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Fight This War Alone.... Dedication to Aastha

Post by MissB on 2013-11-26, 06:21

You told me you would save me,
That you wouldn't let me spiral down into the darkness,
where the shadow's cold, lifeless hands would reach out and drag me under.
But you let me fall. You left me alone.
I am blind fighting off the demons I can't see.
But I know they are there.. I can hear them
Whispering with their sickly haunted voices into my burning mind,
what I fear the most.
You abandoned me, you left me defenseless in the dark.
You said you wouldn't let me break.
YOU PROMISED!
But instead, I have soulless creatures of the night
pulling me into their arms.
To comfort me with the sound of broken hearts
and the smell of rotting flesh.
And I want to scream, to fight back.
But why should I?
You didn't fight for me in the end.
You let me go when I needed you most.
So tonight i will turn off the lights,
and welcome the darkness, the broken sobs of the heartless.
And while they drag me under, you will be in her arms.
Not knowing that I drowned in my own misery.
That I fell into the arms of the shadows I fear the most.
Because you don't deserve to know the burning agony you left me in,
when you pushed me off that cliff.


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Re: Fight This War Alone.... Dedication to Aastha

Post by Shesherkobita on 2013-11-26, 06:27

Did you write this Bea? That is one fantastic poem ... Astha made me real sad today... I would've been gone from that house before sunrise. Scared 

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Re: Fight This War Alone.... Dedication to Aastha

Post by MissB on 2013-11-26, 06:45

Shesherkobita wrote:Did you write this Bea? That is one fantastic poem ... Astha made me real sad today... I would've been gone from that house before sunrise. Scared 
Yhh lately i get bored and start scribbling things down... but today i was just so sadd for her.. nd i know it is not real but there mere thought of him mis-behaving with her is just not right.. nd you can see the signs of withdrawal from aastha. although she is still trying to hang on there I feel might be going to a psychological shock and think she is having an outta body experience... Shlok is just a mean human being

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Re: Fight This War Alone.... Dedication to Aastha

Post by zuzana on 2013-11-26, 07:08

Wow loved it .....awesome emotions ..it was a sad episode..I would love to see a fighting Aastha and yes she has to do it alone

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Re: Fight This War Alone.... Dedication to Aastha

Post by Shesherkobita on 2013-11-26, 08:17





Bea... long hug  Made an edit for your poem... My gift to you, you talented young lady.

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Re: Fight This War Alone.... Dedication to Aastha

Post by MissB on 2013-11-26, 08:59

Shesherkobita wrote:



Bea... long hug     Made an edit for your poem... My gift to you, you talented young lady.
Thank you Sab, I love it... Perfect for the emotions behind the words:cheers:

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Re: Fight This War Alone.... Dedication to Aastha

Post by anusha.cochin on 2013-11-26, 11:22

Nice1....u r very talented dear

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Re: Fight This War Alone.... Dedication to Aastha

Post by slmu on 2013-11-26, 12:20

Oh my.. that's simply amazing .. really brought out Aastha's feelings :cry:

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Re: Fight This War Alone.... Dedication to Aastha

Post by sarra0 on 2013-11-26, 12:44

Bea loved the poem, felt each emotion,

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Re: Fight This War Alone.... Dedication to Aastha

Post by Maria J on 2013-11-27, 09:51

Wow!! Awesome poem

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Re: Fight This War Alone.... Dedication to Aastha

Post by monsi08 on 2013-11-28, 13:14

Superb !

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