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qubool hai 8 january 2014 written episode "my first live update"

Post by cutie pai :-) on 2014-01-08, 21:32

Guys this is my first lu so please ignore mistakes.......

Scene 1:
Location: Ayan’s residence
Mamu is tensed to look at the sketch given by Razia. But because it had been altered by razia, he isnt able to recognise it to be zoya’s. Just then, the servant comes and tell them that rashid is awake and trying to talk. both are worried.Dilshad asks rashid to tell them what happened that night. zoya too assumes the same when rashid begins to respond. Rashid remembers talking to asad, and also overhearing razia’s concern about that stranger who knows about their secret, of the murder that rashid didnt commit and the fire for which he actually was innocent. He confronts them, ans they are shocked. He is shocked to find that mamau too is in this, and was silent for 17 years. rashid resolves to tell the truth. He leaves, while they try to stop him. they go after him, while he accidentally drops those papers. While rashid was giving asad that message, he remembers having fallen down due to a push given by raZia. Zoya says that they know it wasnt an accident. Zoya and dilshad frantically try to ask rashid to give one indication, if he didnt fall, but was thrown from the balcony, that day and was pushed instead of an accident. He manages to nod his head in a yes. All are shocked. zoya then goes onto ask who did this to him. He is about to speak, when his eyes fall on the door. he barely is able to pick his hand and starts pointing to a person. as dilshad, zoya and badi bi all look towards that person, they are shocked to find Mamu and razia standing in the doorway, who are equally shocked at this. Both, mamu and razia are confronted by zoya and dilshad, who ask them about it. razia fumbles and says that they all have gone mad. zoya reprimands that now they know the truth, which rashid himself told them, that it wasnt an accident, but a push by her. Razia is shocked and asks that he cant even speak. zoya says that he can listen and understand and point that razia is the culprit just like he did. Razia asks her what is she trying to imply, and how is she so sure. Dilshad assures that its razia. She says that neither he nor they are fools not to get this, as all conspiracies always end upto her only. razia asks mamu’s help to clarify as they have all gone nuts. zoya asks her to only clarify then about the truth. Both are tensed. Zpya says tht their silence says all, as to who’s right and who’s wrong. razia says that a talk can have ten meanings, but her silence has 100, and asks her not to jump to conclusions. Razia tells zoya that she is unlucky for this family, as thw day that the day that she has stepped in this house, she has brought nothing but bad luck to the people, and asks her to leave before it turns the family and this house into ruins. All are tensed, while zoya is hurt. Badi bi asks what did she just say. as razia is about to speak, badi bi shuts her with a slap, shocking and knosking the wits out of razia, and shocking everyone else. Badi bi tells her to understand that zoya is the bahu, and this house’s respect, and if she taints her name any which way, she wont tolerate it. she says that razia should have been thrown out long back, but they didnt thinking about mamu. razia says that this house is hers too. bado bi says that only papers dont prove the rights, but respect for the elders, and love for the younger. She says that razia cant hndle this, hence its good that she stays within her limits, which would be good for her and the family too. All are tensed, while razia is numb. Mamu doesnt speak too, and leaves. All calm down badi bi, while razia is tensed.

Scene 2:
Location: Haseena’s residence
While setting up the dinner for everyone, nikhat finds the chapattis burnt. She goes to the kitchen to make new ones. After she is gone, haseena comes and replaces them with good rotis. Meanwhile, everyone sits down to eat, and nazma calls nikhat, and she answers that she would just ome. haseena comes in asking whats nikhat doing now. Nazma asks if they can start. haseena says tht they can as she needs extra care now for the baby. As nikhat comes back, with fresh rotis, while all are confused why she made a second batch, she is surprised to see that the rotis are actually all good now. all are again tensed for her, while she is baffled how is this possible. Farhan asks how are these okay then. Haseena smirks. farhan asks her to let be, as it must have been some misunderstanding, and asks her to come and join them. she its down, stll confused, while haseena is amused. She mentions that its ood that she saw burnt rotis and not some ghost. She asks everyone to start.

Scene 3:
Location: Outdoor location
A bonfire i going on, with guitar playing and singing and stuff. One of the students starts strumming the guitar, while humaira and haider have an eye contact. humaira starts singing along with him, surprising haider. she pretends to be shy and romantic in front of haider.

Rest of coming soon....

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Re: qubool hai 8 january 2014 written episode "my first live update"

Post by cutie pai :-) on 2014-01-08, 21:52

Haider is affected by this gesture. All start clapping and applauding her for this. haider excuses himself to leave, but humaira asks him to stay the night. She arranges an extra tent from her teacher and is easily granted one for haider. She instructs haider a certain camp and asks him to retire. As haider moves on, humaira look at him venomously, remembering his kiss.


Mamu reprimands razia that finally the day has arrived that led them to their downfall. Razia says that its difficult times, and now they would have to sit down and think silently. He says that not we but she has to think. Razia asks whats he trying to imply, that only she is implicated in this. He says yes. razia asks him not to force her to open her mouth, and if she drowns he wont be able to survive, as in every crime, they have been equal partners. Mamu asks whats to be done now. Razia tells him not to worry. Mamu asks whats she decided, as she shouldnt worsen matters. razia says that in difficult times, difficult steps need to be taken. Razia remembers zoya’s warning to her. razia thinks that this time, zoya would have to lose to her. The screen freezes on her face.

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Re: qubool hai 8 january 2014 written episode "my first live update"

Post by cutie pai :-) on 2014-01-08, 21:56

Precap: As razia comes inside, to feed rashid some milk, zoya stops her and says that she saw razia mixing something in the milk, to which razia vehemently denies. Zoya tells her to try it herself then first, before giving to him, if razia’s so sure. Razia is tensed, as she fumblingly starts to bring the tumbler closer to her lips. In the outdoor camping, humaira changes the sign of haider’s camp number, with another one, from Camp No. 9 to Camp No. 1. After having done so, Humaira says that for the mistreatment that haider did with her, she would see that he gets such severe punishment, that he never ever forgets or stops repenting what he did to her.






Finally done but guys scene 1 and 2 are not written by myself because of somework but others are mine only

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Re: qubool hai 8 january 2014 written episode "my first live update"

Post by slmu on 2014-01-08, 21:59

Great going Jenny :)

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Re: qubool hai 8 january 2014 written episode "my first live update"

Post by pollyanna on 2014-01-08, 22:04

Thats wonderful Jenny....keep it up :)

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Post by zuzana on 2014-01-08, 22:06

Awesome Jenny...I just love the way you phrase your words...  long hug

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Re: qubool hai 8 january 2014 written episode "my first live update"

Post by cutie pai :-) on 2014-01-08, 22:43

slmu wrote:Great going Jenny :)
thanks shanthi :) :)

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Re: qubool hai 8 january 2014 written episode "my first live update"

Post by cutie pai :-) on 2014-01-08, 22:45

pollyanna wrote:Thats wonderful Jenny....keep it up :)
thanks pollyana......u :):P  

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Post by cutie pai :-) on 2014-01-08, 22:48

zuzana wrote:Awesome Jenny...I just love the way you phrase your words...  long hug
aww thank u sooo much zuzana long hug

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