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Post by ShaliniRobinson on 2014-02-04, 19:17

Let me start from a few days back...


The Mother ... eventually

Hameeda Bano walked into Jalal's room and expressed her concern over Jodha's suspicion regarding Benazir. A few days later, she turned up again when Jalal stood alone and gave words to his feelings.

The very same feelings Jalal had expressed to Maaham Anga - not his mother.

Maaham, who has raised Jalal since he was a boy, did nothing to meet his need. She saw Jalal inclining towards a woman, his own wife, Jodha.

She did everything to cause a rift. She used the knowledge of his need to block him.


Yet, here is Hameeda ... the mother who has spent very little time with her son. Without Jalal saying a word, she knows the very feelings in his heart. From the beginning she has wished, prayed and put in effort that Jalal would have a partner who would love him for who he is.

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The Unspoken Wish

It is a need of which Jalal himself has spoken of; something he has been looking for even in Ruqaiya... yet still not expressed.

Long back, when Jalal returned from Amer with Jodha and the news was rampant of his having shared the khema with Jodha - he looked to see if Ruqaiya would be jealous. When she denied, he warned her that she should be jealous. This was her own husband she was talking of. Yet, he knew that Ruqaiya's eyes have been fixed on the Auhda even though she does hold Jalal among those closest to her.

She is not what Jalal needs and, though, she's been closest to him - she has missed that one place next to him of which he speaks, yearns for, of which his mother speaks. Ruqaiya does love him for being her friend and respect him for being her king - but the place of a wife, she's left void.

It isn't that she could not fill it, she has simply set her eyes away from it. She has set the Auhda of a king above that of a husband.

Poor Jalal! He looked for this streak of jealousy in Jodha. He does see it, though she denies it. He loves to see the woman jealous... alas! she had already refused him by then. All the more are Jalal's effort to prove to Jodha that she is in fact jealous of Benazir.

What irks him is probably that -- he can see Jodha is jealous but she not only denies it, but also continues to refuse him.

Because he does not attach it to love or heart, he attributes it to supposed Jodha's fear of losing her auhda.

Poor poor Jalal!


-*-


The Chess all over again....?

Ruqaiya has once again left her Shah-en-shah open to danger ... all in a mad rush to protect her own position.
Jodha has once again protected her baadshah.


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Answered Prayer

And ... now Jodha lies behosh. Even as she went behosh, she told him that it was her 'kartavya'.

Now, Jalal walks around helpless.

It's only a matter of time before anyone realizes that Zakira has been poisoned once in a similar manner and if she lives, so can Jodha.

Yes, Jalal's prayer for Jodha's life is answered -- but how long before his wish is answered!

Benazir has helped spill out a few skeletons about Ruqaiya's move to give way to her just to keep Jodha at bay ... is it the start of falling out of other skeletons? Shareef, Adham, Maaham, ... !


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Re: A new beginning...? Or old skeletons?

Post by candy on 2014-02-04, 19:31

shalini... a very well written post ..
agree ur POV over HB and ruks..
ruks is not the one whom jalal expects to share his heart.

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Post by monsi08 on 2014-02-04, 19:34

superb post !!!

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Post by clarissasham on 2014-02-04, 20:25

Today his brain worked as you said zakira was remembered ..nice post shalini.

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Post by clarissasham on 2014-02-04, 20:25

Today his brain worked as you said zakira was remembered ..nice post shalini.

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Re: A new beginning...? Or old skeletons?

Post by ShaliniRobinson on 2014-02-04, 21:16

Thank you, buddies :)

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Post by zuzana on 2014-02-04, 21:30

Brilliant post Shalini !

Marvellous how you connected with what Jalal is looking at in his wives...never realised his asking Ruqs about being jealous...haiyya haiyye Jallu miyya wants wiffy to be jealous...


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Re: A new beginning...? Or old skeletons?

Post by ShaliniRobinson on 2014-02-04, 23:27

zuzana wrote:Brilliant post Shalini !

Marvellous how you connected with what Jalal is looking at in his wives...never realised his asking Ruqs about being jealous...haiyya haiyye Jallu miyya wants wiffy to be jealous...


Yeah.. the poor chap's been hoping for ever that at least one of his many wives would be jealous of others because of the 'husband' status and not the 'king' status LOL .... I say again, poor chappie..

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Post by amimus on 2014-02-04, 23:50

Fantastic Post Shalini. So right said about Jalal state of heart. He is looking for someone who can share his feelings and love him as a husband and not a king. 

I also had thought about Zakira the same thing. Can we expect our Jalal getting his brains back and stop being so dumb.

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Post by sarra0 on 2014-02-05, 04:40

Nice post, mahamanga is too fixated on other things to c, hear jalals need...Ruqs is all about Audha even wen she was expectin, it was wat she would get out of it...And that's one reason they for so long though he didnt have a heart cause there was no one to engage it, to trouble it..

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