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Post by aishakapoor on 2014-04-03, 00:06

OK GUYS SINCE U LIKED MY TOPIC.....I SHALL CONTINUE MY OWN STORY...THIS IS ONE OF MY CREATIONS.....ITS CHAPTERWISE......LIKE I SHALL WRITE IT DOWN CHAPTERWISE....
HOPE U LIKE THE FIRST CHAPTER...ONLY THEN I SHALL CONTINUE....
                                                         CHAPTER 1!
THIS GOES BACK TO THE TIME WHEN BENAZIR WAS A PART OF THE SHOW....
SO THE EPISODE BEGINS LIKE THIS....
JALAL AND RUKKAIYA ARE SITTING AND PLAYING CHAUSAR.....SALIMA BEGUM AND HAMIDA BANU BEGUM ARE WATCHING THEM PLAY....JALAL TELLS RUKS...."TUM AGAR YEH KHEL JEET GAYI TOH MAIN TUMHE JO CHAIYE WOH DUNGA......" RUKS GETS TURNED ON!!!
THEY ARE PLAYING.. JALAL IS THINKING THT HE IS GONNA WIN THIS!!! LATER HE SEES JODHA...SHE IS PRAYING TO THE TULSI PLANT....HE IS COMPLETELY MESMERIZED LOOKING AT HER...SHE IS WEARING RED COLOUR CHUNARI OVER HER HEAD....AND HER HAIR IS LEFT OPEN....SHE HAS HER EYES CLOSED AND SHE HAS A LIGHT SMILE OVER HER FACE...
JALAL IS JUST STARING...RUKS ASKS JALAL TO PLAY..HE JUS RANDOMY MOVES ONE OF THE PIECE.....UNFORTUNATELY HE DOESNT REALIZE THT HE HAS MOVED THE KING ITSELF....RUKS TAKES ADVANTAGE AS USUAL AND KILLS THE KING!! 
SHE STARTS SCREAMING! HUM JEET GAYE HUM JEET GAYE!!
JALAL IS BACK IN THE REAL WORLD AND REALIZES THT HE LOST....JODHA HEARS RUKS VICTORY SCREAM AND GOES THERE...RUKS JUST GIVES HER A LOOK....
JALAL ASKS RUKS WHAT DO U WANT...SHE SAYS.. AAJ RAAT KO HUM JASHN MANAYEGE! JALAL SAYS JASHN KIS KHUSHI MEIN......AND SHE SAYS HUM BAS JASHN MANANA HAI....JALAL LOOKS AT JODHA AND SMIRKS...HE THINKS I SHOULD TAKE ADVANTAGE OF THIS SITUATION...
JALAL LOOKS AT RUKS AND SAYS....OK....WE SHALL HAVE A JASHN....AND BENAZIR WILL DANCE....AFTER ALL NO ONE HAS MORE BEAUTY AND ELEGANCE THAN HER....JODHA STARES AT JALAL! SHE IS BURNING!! HE SAYS UNKI KHUBSURATI...UNKI ADAA...UNKE SAAMNE TOH CHAND BHI SHARMA JAYE...
JODHA IS BURNING!
RUKS SEES THT JALAL IS TRYING TO MAKE JODHA ANGRY SO SHE PLAYS ALONG AND SAYS...HA JALAL.... TUM SUCH KEH RAHE HO.....
JALAL SAYS KI AAJ RAAT WOH HUMARE LIYE NACHENGI....
EVERY1 LEAVES AND JODHA IS ABOUT TO LEAVE AND JALAL CALLS OUT...JODHA BEGUM....
SHE REPLIES JI SHESHENSHAH
JALAL: AAP AA RAHI HAI NA? RAAT KO JASHN MEIN..
JODHA:HUM WAHA AA KAR KYA KARENGE...HUM AAPNE HOJRA MEIN RAHENGE..
JALAL: NAHI AAP AAYIYE JODHA BEGUM....BENAZIR KA NAC DEKHNE KE LIYE TOH CHAND BHI NICHE ZAMEEN PAR AA JAYE...AAP BHI AAYIYE....UNKI ADAA AUR UNKI SUNDARATA KO DEKIYE.
JODHA :JAISA AAP KAHE SHEHENSHAH. CHALTE HAI PRANAM...
JODHA COMES BACK TO HER HOJRA...AND  THINKS....HUM DIKHAYENGE SHEHENSHAH KO KI SUNDARATA KYA HOTI HAI!


NEXT CHAPTER SHORT NOTE:
JALAL IS SITTING ON HIS ROYAL SIT AND BENAZIR DANCE IS OVER...EVERY1 IS HAPPY AND PRAISING BENAZIR'S BEAUTY.....JUST THEN AN ANNOUNCEMENT IS MADE BY SERVANT

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Re: new topic!

Post by Shesherkobita on 2014-04-03, 00:13

Hay I loved it.... Why short one? Yeh dil mange more!

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Re: new topic!

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-04-03, 00:14

HAYEEE this is a fan fiction !!
I am so happy to read this Aisha !!..
 Party1 Dance 

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Re: new topic!

Post by aishakapoor on 2014-04-03, 00:16

THANK YOU!! NEXT CHAPTER TOMORROW!

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Re: new topic!

Post by aishakapoor on 2014-04-03, 00:18

HEY SUMANA I REGISTERED....SO NOW WAT? AND I DONT REALLY HAVE A PHONE WHICH HAS INTERNET CONNECTIONS

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Re: new topic!

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-04-03, 01:30

aishakapoor wrote:HEY SUMANA I REGISTERED....SO NOW WAT? AND I DONT REALLY HAVE A PHONE WHICH HAS INTERNET CONNECTIONS

Welcome to Dhwani as an registered member .. Posting and commenting will now be much easier for you my dear Aisha ...  long hug 
And you will find that your thread will be a super hit as we all are crazzy about fan fictions ..
 Dance 

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Re: new topic!

Post by Shegarf71 on 2014-04-03, 05:09

Very very happy to read this story Aisha..thank you so much for posting..I loved it  long hug welcome to dhwani and hope u will have a great time with us all  hpee 

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Re: new topic!

Post by KB on 2014-04-03, 08:32

mindblowing aisha, keep it on....................waiting 4 ur next chapter........... hug1  hug1

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Re: new topic!

Post by SABA KAUNAIN on 2014-04-03, 12:17

Plz continue the next chapter soon

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Re: new topic!

Post by anurao66 on 2014-04-03, 12:20

Aisha 

Loved reading it please do continue.

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chapter 2

Post by aishakapoor on 2014-04-03, 17:46

                                     CHAPTER 2:
 JALAL IS STANDING IN THE FRONT OF THE MIRROR....LOOKING AT HIMSELF....SMILING....HE STARTS DRESSING HIMSELF..... HE TAKES OUT THE BLUE KURTA.....HIS SERVANTS MAKE HIM WEAR IT....HE LOOKS AT HIMSELF...
RUKS ENTERS THE HOJRA...SHE IS DRESSED IN GREEN AND RED....



SHE ASKS THE SERVANTS TO LEAVE....JALAL LOOKS AT HER...HE SAYS" WAAH RUKKAIYA TUMHARE UPAR YE HARA RANG BOHOT KHUBSURAT DIKHTA HAI....AAJ SACH MEIN TUM BEGUM-E-KHAAS LAG RAHI HO..."
RUKS SMILES...SHE SAYS" AAP KO KHUSH KARNE KE LIYE HUM KUCH BHI KAR SAKTE HAI JALAL...."
JALAL SMILES...
RUKS: JALAL HUM AAPKI KHUSHI KE LIYE SAB KUCH KAR SAKTE HAI AUR AAP?
JALAL: SAAAF SAAF KAHIYE RUKAIYYA BEGUM AAPKO KYA CHAHIYE?
RUKS: AAPKO KAISE PATA CHALA KI HUM AAPSE KUCH MANGANA CHAHTE HAI?
JALAL: AAPKE BOLNE KE TARIKE SE...KAHIYE...
RUKS: JALAL HUM CHAHTE HA KI AAP JASHN KE BAAD HUMARE HOJRE MEIN RAHE....
JALAL: JO HUKUM BEGUM-E-KHAAS...
RUKS IS HAPPY...AND SHE LEAVES TO GO TO THE JASHN...
JALAL THINKS AB HUM JODHA BEGUM KA CHEHRA DEKHNA CHAHTE HAI...


JODHA IS IN HER ROOM....MOTI ASKS HER TO GET READY...SHE REFUSES TO DO SO...MOTI SAYS SHEHENSHAH KA AADHESH HAI..AAPKO JANA HI HOGA....
JODHA MAKES A FACE AND THEN GOES TO CHANGE...
JASHN PLACE....
EVERY1 IS SITTING....
JALAL;S ENTRY IS ANNOUNCED....JALAL ENTERS...
AND THEN LATER HE ANNOUNCES THT THIS JASHN IS FOR RUKS BEGUM AND HENCE WANTS RUKS TO COME AND SIT NEXT TO HER....JODHA FUMES...
BENAZIR 'S ENTRY IS ANNOUNCED....SHE WALKS IN...HER STYLE...SHE IS WEARING IN PINK....AND HAS A VEIL COVERING HER FACE...ONLY HER EYES ARE SEEN...WELL SHE DOES LOOK STUNNING! ALL THE MEN ARE DOWN ON THERE KNEES...AND ALL THE WOMAN ARE BURNING WITH ANGER!


JALAL LOOKS AT JODHA
SHE IS BURNING WITH ANGER....
HE ENJOYS THT SIGHT!
SHE SMILES TO HIMSELF AND THEN SAYS TO BENAZIR......AAJ TUM IS MEHFILL MEIN AAG LAGA DO! DIKHA DO SABKO KI AAPSE JYAADA KHUBSURAT AUR KOI NAHI.....HE AGAIN LOOKS AT JODHA...JODHA IS GIVING HIM THE KILLER LOOKS!!
BENAZIR SITS SOWN AND STARTS SINGING....
Aa...
Tumhari Adao Pe Main Vari Vari - 2
Tumhari Adao Pe Main Vari Vari - 6
Har Ek Baat Hain Jaise - 2
Meethi Karaari
Tumhari Adao Pe Main Vari Vari - 2
SHE GOES TO JALAL AND TRYS TO FEEL HIM UP JALAL PLAYS ALONG....RUKS DOES NOT CARE....SHE GIVE JALAL A DRINK.....SHE SMILES AND CONTINUES TO LOOK AT BENAZIR...SHE CONTINUES
Haa..
Chalate Ho Jo Naino Ke Baan Tikhe
Nishaana Tumh Aaisa Kaha Se Ho Sikhe
Ke Dil Mein Kasak Ho Magar Pyari Pyari
Tumhari Adao Pe Main Vari Vari - 2



JODHA IS JUST STARING AT THEM.....SHE IS FUMING......
BENAZIR JUST CONTINUES HER DANCE...AND EVERY1 IS MESMERIZED.....ALL THE MEN!!
LATER WHEN BENAZIR IS DONE DANCING.....EVERY1 STARTS CLAPPING AND PRAISING BENAZIR...
BENAZIR GOES BACK TO HER PLACE AND JALAL SAYS....ISSE KEHTE HAI KHUBSURATI....
AAJ KA JASHN YAHI KATAM HOTA HAI...." JUST THEN A SERVANT COMES AND SAYS....SHEHENSHAH...BAHAR KOI HAI...AUR KEH RAHI HAI KI WOH BENAZIR SE BHI JYAADA KHUBSURAT HAI....
JALAL ASKS TO SEND HER IN....


NEXT CHAPTER NOTE: A BEATIFUL LADY IN RED IS DANCING HER FACE IS COVERED WITH GHUNGAT....HER BODY IS LIKE MELTING GOLD!! EVERY1 IS STUNNED LOOKING AT HER DANCE!

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Re: new topic!

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-04-03, 18:03

Wah wah wah wah kya khoob likha hai yaara .. I am impressed ... Great fan fiction yaar 
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Re: new topic!

Post by aishakapoor on 2014-04-03, 18:16

--sumana13-- wrote:Wah wah wah wah kya khoob likha hai yaara .. I am impressed ... Great fan fiction yaar 
 hpee  long hug
thank you sumana!

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Re: new topic!

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-04-03, 18:19

aishakapoor wrote:
--sumana13-- wrote:Wah wah wah wah kya khoob likha hai yaara .. I am impressed ... Great fan fiction yaar 
 hpee  long hug
thank you sumana!
Where did you get those pics from yaar .. They are just awesome and fitting the story excatly ... Well done 
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Re: new topic!

Post by aishakapoor on 2014-04-03, 18:33

--sumana13-- wrote:
aishakapoor wrote:
--sumana13-- wrote:Wah wah wah wah kya khoob likha hai yaara .. I am impressed ... Great fan fiction yaar 
 hpee  long hug
thank you sumana!
Where did you get those pics from yaar .. They are just awesome and fitting the story excatly ... Well done 
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i created them!!! hpee

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Post by JAISMINE on 2014-04-03, 18:43

oooohh!!!...............jaldi jaldi likho na next part pleeeeej....n Jo ki bhi ek pic de do.....I really want to read more of this story....n c Jo's cartoon wala pic bounce  bounce  luv  luv

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Post by aishakapoor on 2014-04-03, 19:18

JAISMINE wrote:oooohh!!!...............jaldi jaldi likho na next part pleeeeej....n Jo ki bhi ek pic de do.....I really want to read more of this story....n c Jo's cartoon wala pic bounce  bounce  luv  luv
ON THE WAY JAISMINE!!! WAIT TILL TOMORROW!

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Post by aishakapoor on 2014-04-04, 16:25

HEYS GUYS ITS ME!! I WONT BE ABLE TO CONTINUE THE STORY FOR A FEW DAYS..... I HAVE MY WORK TARGETS TO COMPLETE....SO REALLY SORRY...WILL CONTIUE A LITTLE LATER!

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Re: new topic!

Post by aishakapoor on 2014-04-30, 23:02

hey guys i have new chapters up!!! do u guys want me to continue?????

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Re: new topic!

Post by ana28 on 2014-04-30, 23:41

sure aisha...plz continue it

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Re: new topic!

Post by radharockzz on 2014-05-01, 23:30

Hey.....aisha..just loved your story....plzzz do continue and post the new chapters asap...!!:-):-)

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Post by PrincessNancy on 2014-05-03, 12:40

This is beautiful! So Jalal was making Jo jealous! Going to read part 2 now... Great going...Loved it!

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Re: new topic!

Post by PrincessNancy on 2014-05-03, 12:44

Wow! Part 2 was superb... Lovely going... I think the lady who will dance after Ben is Jo!
Superb chap Aisha!

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Re: new topic!

Post by yagavarthini on 2014-07-06, 11:55

Hi

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Post by rose kaintura on 2014-07-17, 23:05

nice asesome

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