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Post by Tanthya on 2014-04-23, 19:43




Jodha is still trying to mend the necklace all the while  praying  to Gauri maa  to protect her  Husband..While on the other  side.. Abul Mali gleefully cackles   that no prayers can save him NOW..


Amer:

Jodha has  repaired  the necklace, puts it around herself n smiles in relief...


ORCHARD


Abul Mali thrusts the sword  into  Jalal ... only for the sword to halt on encountering the  Karna's kavach kundal in the form of that Sika.. Jalal is stunned as realization seeps in that he is alive and that the coin has stopped his  one way journey to meet his maker..Grabbing the opportunity and some  soil  from the ground, he throws it  upon Abul Mali's eyes.. Abul Mali totters   back..Jalal pounces  on Abul Mali.. Before Abul Mali  can recoup his lost advantage .. Jalal has Abul Mali in his strangle hold..with a murderous rage  Jalal is about to plunge the sharp sword into Abul Mali's bony chest when sanity comes n he realizes that Abul Mali is after all his BIL n he cannot kill him ..  Jalal settles for blinding Abul Mali's  eye..   Jalal roars that everytime Abul Mali sees his reflection , he will remember his encounter  n cringe in shame.. Jalal further adds that He cannot  be killed as the love and affection f his subjects are acting as his shields...not just that he has to earn the love of his wife tooo and he will not die until he rules HER heart... luv  luv  luv 

Jalal begins to walk away  .. when the loss of blood finally is felt  and Jalal faints without undue dramatics, His blurry eyes notice a group of  colorful people who appear to be soldiers closing in on him...


 AMER

The pooja begins in Amer... Jodha is lost in thought  , quite naturally her thoughts seem to centre around one individual ..That said individual being  Your's truly !!!  Twisted Evil  Twisted Evil   The  bootiful , lovely, caring Tanthya  ..Just kidding..  Jodha seems to be  deep in thoughts thinking about Jalal n getting vexed  wondering as to why she IS thinking about a man who hurt her.. The pooja continues ..


PALACE

Jalal regains consciousness.. A vaidji is about to dole out some potion when Jalal stops his hand thinking him to be a enemy ..  Raja Bharmal enters the room and assures Jalal that he is among friends * wooo, I am the  latest phangurl of Bharmal from today *  Bharmal continues ... He obviously being a astute man had realized that Jalal's life was in oeroetual threat and had sent a platoon behind Jalal, to follow him, without Jalal being made aware of their presence.. Bharmal thanks the lucky stars for opting to follow this prudent path  and he points out to Jalal that  It was thanks to his decision tht Jalal was rescued in time ..

Jalal realizes the enormity of Bharmals decision and thanks him... Jalal being Jalal has only one thought in mind .. he  wants to talk,chat, speak with his Jodha Begum..Bharmal informs Jalal that Jodha has left for Ghangor Puja..



GHANGOR Temple


Jodha is back to the same temple ..Her mind on rewind  as she recollects meeting Jalal  in this very spot  ..Jodha wonders why her heart thinks of the man whom she wants to forget..With a sigh ..Jodha turns towards the pond...


On the  road..Jalal  is seen   stumbling, staggerng, wobbling his way towards the temple .. disregarding the sound advice of Raja Bharmal who wants him in bed..ALONE  ofc.. But Jalal is as obstinate as Goat n wants to see Jodha at any cost.. So ina  Silk Smitha state.. That is in half dressed State..Jalal enters the temple.. and goes towards the perimeter where Jodha is  praying...


Jodha turns towards the pond and  does a  mental high jump that would have broken Sergei Bubka's record with ease..She is startled to see Jalal's reflection in the water.. Jodha stares unblinkingly and the apparition refuses to go away ... Jodha is checking her faculties internally n wondering what is wrong with her senses..


Mainavati who was standing a bit away from  Jodha spots the wounded Jalal n wonders at his presence ..

Jodha who has done a mental check up and concluded that all is well, turns back almost fearfully and gets jolted when she sees no one behind her who remotely resembles Jalal..

 Where was jalal??

As Jodha was mooning over Jalal's reflection n seriously  doubting her sanity..Jalal is overcome by cramps n he keels over ..The Brothers of Jodha n Bharmal rush over, stop Jalal from toppling over and carry him to the palace..

Mainavati  approaches Bharmal..and in a gentle way rebukes Bharmal for bringing Jalal to the temple n the palace.. She reminds  Bharmal of another obstinate  goat.. err Jodha .. Bharmal  displays his wisdom..says that Jalal was injured and needed treatment besides this was a husband wife tiff where both have to listen to one another instead of turning deaf.. So he felt that this was an ideal opportunity for  beginning afresh ..


POND

Jodha completes her prayers ..comes to her Maasa and like any dutiful daughter informs her mom of Jalal's visitation both today and last year ..Mainavati  is delighted to hear that Jalal was the chosen one for Jodha.. Being a good Mother n a good player .. She subtly plays on Jodha's feelings reminding Jodha about  her decision to stay away from jalal and of not going to Agra ever .. and tells her not to think about Jalal anymore since she  does not want any part of him.. Jodha looks very reluctant  to follow this orders..  * Sumbody in deep deep lubbs *

PALACE

Jodha and party have  reached home.. Jodha is still perplexed and wondering as to why she is  seeing Jalal everywhere..when she bumps into her Chachi/kaki .. Jodha  innocently explains that she is seeing Jalal everywhere..Jalal who was dozing in Jodha's room, wakes up on hearing her voice.. calls out to her .. Jodha hears  his voice too and is again startled.. She confides that she  has begun to hear Jalal's voice too.. Chachisa smiles in mischief n walks away ...

Jodha enters her room and stands poleaxed as she sees Jalal lieing on the bed.. She cannot believe her eyes.. She closes them firmly and  nearly jumps out of her skin  as jalal's voice drifts closely.. Jalal in a tired n soft voice is saying that he wants to speak to ehr whiel Jodha's eyes does X ray scanning and deduces that Jalal is wounded .. Jodha does not seem to melt though.. She is fixated on not returning to Agra..


Bharmal interrupts the bickering obstinate goats  Jodha Jalal.. seeks Jalal's permission to speak to Jodha alone..On getting the nod..Bharmal leads Jodha outside.. where Jodha is soundly rebuked for her uncaring  attitude..Bharmal points out  that Jalal is wounded and needs some tender ministration and care  but Jodha is so much into herself , her anger that she is  unable to see that plain fact..Bharmal exasperatedly reminds to ask herself whether she is the same girl who broke all rules to save a wounded pigeos.. he demands to know where her compassion  and her softer feelings have vanished.. Bharmal tells Jodha that if she so wants to stick to her stubborness, then she is welcome to shift to another room while Jalal will be taken care by others..

Jodha is chastened .. she walks towards the courtyard where she hears Mainavati  issuing a set of commands aimed at caring for Jalal..  Jodh overhears it..Mainavati reminds Jodha about Rajvanshi hospitality and how Jalal is their guest..   Jodha  agrees  to be Jalal's nurse...orders the maid to egt Badam Milk too..

Mainavati realizes that Jodha is deeply in love with Jalal and is angry n wants Jalal to woo her..


PRECAP

Jodha is leaning towards Jalal and Jalal looks as if  he is about to be seduced and wondering how to save himself..


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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by candy on 2014-04-23, 19:50

ROFL ROFL Sathya begum .. Wat a pic !! Whota pic !!

deepu & sonu babe's dialogues for jallu and ullu ROFL ROFL i called AM so, cos he will realise today coin is powerful than sword,

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by candy on 2014-04-23, 19:51

Koi ambe maa ko bi boost de do na..
hppy she deserves more

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by Tanthya on 2014-04-23, 20:05

updated 1st part

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by Jiggy on 2014-04-23, 20:07

*ties her seatbelt and screams*
IT was so so obvious that the coin would save him....
muahahahahah....true love people.... Clap
bahahahaha... *cough* hack*cough*
ok tants... bring it on..... jiggs all set......  hpee

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-04-23, 20:08

Silky silky baal tere hai kya karoo 
Beheki beheki chaal tere hai kya  karoo 


Inn zulphon  sey  benzie ne kiya thaa pyaar 
Benzie ke gam mein  Abul ne ka hai bura haal 


This is for the silky mop of a wig on abul's head that sathya has shared 
 hppy  hppy


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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by Shesherkobita on 2014-04-23, 20:08

Thanks for the wonderful live update.

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by neha on 2014-04-23, 20:10

candy wrote:Koi ambe maa ko bi boost de do na..
 hppy she deserves more

ROFL Candy ! Jodha begum will keep torturing Amber Maa and Kahnha forever...koi fayda nahi hai ROFL

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-04-23, 20:23

Loved loved the precap was Jo going to kiss Jalal ??  
 Starry Love


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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by candy on 2014-04-23, 20:24

A coin is a.. coin is a..coin is a.. Coin COIN Twisted Evil

me bi paagal ho gayi.. hppy

all wives have to learn to mend their necklace on their own for a longer life of their husbands.. Coz.. Once necklace is mended even natural calamities cant harm them ROFL ROFL


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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-04-23, 20:25

candy wrote:A coin is a.. coin is a..coin is a.. Coin COIN Twisted Evil 

me bi paagal ho gayi.. hppy

all wives have to learn to mend their necklace on their own for a longer life of their husbands.. Coz.. Once necklace is mended even natural calamities cant harm them ROFLROFL

Good one Candy 
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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by candy on 2014-04-23, 20:26

Neha.. Tats true.. After viewers they are the most pitiful ones hppy

they get tired listening to Jo.. Tats y boost or any supplements ROFL

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by candy on 2014-04-23, 20:28

Manu.. Am i better than you.. You are so great.. Wrote poem inspired by tat wired wig. ROFL


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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by aishakapoor on 2014-04-23, 20:33

yo yo honey singh

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by neha on 2014-04-23, 20:40

Sathu, I'm laughing like a moron  hppy hppy

Karna's kavach kundal  hppy  and Bharmal wants Jalal in bed ?? ALONE  ROFL   Censored 

Jalal in Silk Smitha state and Jodha the Obstinate Goat  Thumbsup

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Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-04-23, 20:45

candy wrote:Manu.. Am i better than you.. You are so great.. Wrote poem inspired by tat wired wig. ROFL 

That wig is inspiring me to write more but I am scared of rotten eggs and tamatars thrown at me 
 hppy  ROFL

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by Tanthya on 2014-04-23, 20:50

updated

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by Nanayaa623 on 2014-04-23, 20:50

Tanthya, my dearest,  long hug 

Wow the coin is doing miracles!  Party1 

I am happy with the way the CV's manipulated things to get Jalal to Amer in a dignify way and bring these two love birds together.

Pari and Rajat are doing a wonderful acting here.

Romantico moments ahead.
 Party2

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by Nanayaa623 on 2014-04-23, 20:53

OMG,! is Jodha going to kiss Jalal or this twisted CV's making another dream sequence. Bang

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by Tanthya on 2014-04-23, 21:12

Nanayaa623 wrote:OMG,! is Jodha going to kiss Jalal or this twisted CV's making another dream sequence. Bang


Neither... simple case of MU'in intentions  ... hpee  hpee

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-04-23, 21:15

Tanthya wrote:
Nanayaa623 wrote:OMG,! is Jodha going to kiss Jalal or this twisted CV's making another dream sequence. Bang


Neither... simple case of MU'in intentions  ... hpee  hpee
Do you mean she has come to take her pillow or sheet to sleep on the settee in the same room as ordered by Papa Bharmaal ..
Am I. Right Sathya ?? 
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Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-04-23, 21:17

aishakapoor wrote:yo yo honey singh
Aisha the message in your signature is so true ... Love it 
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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by Sanchu on 2014-04-23, 21:18

sathya.............love u jaan...............now i also hav becom majnu..................i 'm in love wid ur wus........ hppy  hppy 

bharmal-mainavati...gr8 gr8.....................bharmalji---apne aaj wo kam kar dikhaye hai jo hum kabse karna chahate the.........to point out jo's too much egoistic nature................& mainavati --aap to chhupi rustam nikle haa........gr8 planning..... Twisted Evil  Twisted Evil 

jallu, tum kp abh main kya batau?????seriously wo coinn tumhare kavach ban gaye...........i knw u r repenting "why??why?? allah.mujhe isi waqt ghayal kiya thik hai.jo ke paas a gaye hum.........b8 itna zyaada zakhm kyun??????jab humare paas chance hain, saas-sasur ke green signal hain.........ek room mein jo ke saath hain.b8 sharir mein itni taqat nehi ke romance karke baaghin ko convince kar sake!!!!!!!oh shit!! oh shit!!! Bang  Bang  Bang "

& jo , apki aur ek hunar ka hume aaj pata chala ki aap jwellery bhi thik kar sakti hai.........good good.....oye, koi jallu ko yeh nayi invented hunar ke baare mein to koi batao!!!!!!!! hppy  hppy


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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by aishakapoor on 2014-04-23, 21:18

--sumana13-- wrote:
aishakapoor wrote:yo yo honey singh
Aisha the message in your signature is so true ... Love it 
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thanks sumana!!!

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 23rd April

Post by Jiggy on 2014-04-23, 21:26

HEAR HEAR
Tants begum-e-update has declared...
our shahi goats are very much in lubb.... Starry Love
so throw away your mallets and hammers....
the bacteria of love has spread..... let's partay...!!! ROFL

thanks for another brilliant update tants... you lighten up every episode and one as delicious as this one...? lovely lovely lovely long hug
jalal leaving abul mali, that too disfigured, was a huge mistake... he should have finished te job then and there only... oh well...
the ameris are officially my fav now... bharmal used to irk me but today i'm thankful...
he's going to amer...he's going to amer...
jalal is going to amer... romance time... LEP LEP TIME...!! ROFL

though tants.... a Big thank you for putting that wonderful image of bharmal inviting jalal to bed.... seriously girl... *bwak* ew ew ew...

gangaur...*sigh*... beautiful memories... and a beautiful scene, enough said...
jodha thinking she's hallucinating jalal and his voice... that was too too epic... I'm so glad this scene was there too...
now jo gets to play nurse... and jalal will be in bliss being lepped by his baaghin...
precap..? can't wait
awesome episode today.... San CV's ki kripa hai...
zor se bolo... jai mayya cv's. hppy


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