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Post by harrybird on 2014-05-01, 12:01

pollyanna wrote:
lashy wrote:Just one question dear mods - am I allowed to use profanity as part of the story (it is a story of a bunch of college-goers so the requirement) and how hot in the hot-0-meter is permissible here?  Embarassed 
Its only as part of the story - my other posts will be as decent as can be - promise! 
Also, it does deal with a sensitive issue of inter-religious love story, but that's something I will be taking extra care with.... Question

Go ahead Shraddha.....as informed adults we all know the story of bees and birds Wink we have grown up reading M&Bs and Nora Roberts....:)

But at the same time all of us here know the lakshmanrekha too....

Only thing which is not allowed in the forum is use of un-parliamentary language/ derogatory words which involves region, creed, caste or religion.

Thank u  Lashy & Pallavi!  hug1  

Wow! Thats exciting news for us!

Get ready everyone, the hot-O-meter bulb is going to blast!  Kiss  


 Harry


 Dance Dance  Dance

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Post by zuzana on 2014-05-01, 21:22

Lashy brilliant  characterisation and the precinct for the story is very good..I just loved the writing style  Clap ...hope kekta gets inspired by such writings...Please continue posting cant wait  bounce

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Post by lashy on 2014-05-01, 22:19

harrybird wrote:Dear Lashy,

Brilliant piece of writing !!!


 Thumbsup  Thumbsup  Thumbsup ....


Your writing style is smooth and effortless!


You simply captivated my imagination with your very first chapter....Eagerly waiting for your chapter 2!

 long hug 
I liked your Jodha more than the serial version. Rocking Intro for Jo & Jallu. I-pad man? cute nickname ( inspired by Rajat?)


Harry


PS: Are u an aspiring writer or just hobby?
I am not an aspiring writer, my dear... this is just my hobby.. I haven't read any major novels either.. just one or two....
This is my second attempt at writing a fan fiction... so, please bear with me if I fall short anywhere...  long hug  long hug and thanks so much for your lovely words of praise my dear... this one will have a lot of gadgets and gizmos (inspired by my cousins'/brother's obsessions of course hppy )

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Post by PrincessNancy on 2014-05-02, 14:32

Superb part 1 !! Enjoyed reading it... I am still wondering whos d stalker
Shes cute..gutsy and Lucky...huh! Adbul smells fishy

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Post by PrincessNancy on 2014-05-02, 14:37

Wow di!! You have got new readers here haan... Chalo...Include me in *wink*

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Post by PrincessNancy on 2014-05-02, 15:35

Btw di.. It is also possible that I am faaltu mein doubting Meera and Payal... jabki the stalker might be totally someone else!! God! You have build it up so cleverly that I find no clue... Bad bad.. very bad di... lol jus kiddin... PLease update part 2 soon...
Dying to know what happens next?

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Post by Maria J on 2014-05-02, 17:16

wow nice one.. Pls do continue soon...

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Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-05-02, 18:55

lashy wrote:
--sumana13-- wrote:Res for  commenting later ..

Edited after reading the fan fiction ....
First of all i welcome our New. Fan fiction writer  to Dhwani once again ..
 long hug 
Absolutely a pleasure to read you my friend .. And this is so much like. M&B !  It is so real so natural .. You are an awesome writer Lashy . I am going to follow this. ff. right uptill the end ...

Loved the college settings .. And the first meeting of the leads 
 Thumbsup  Dance  Clap 
Just one query ..what id DID. ..as in .." However, being the youngest and being the only girl amongst 4 siblings DID have its advantages too...."

Sometimes Do confuse common terms with something else so wanted to clarify 
Thank You Lashy
Hi Sumana,
Thanks so much firstly for the warm welcome and making this place everyone's home... such a sweet person you are... I am glad you liked the setting and the first meet... Hope you'll like it more as the time passes by...
As for the capitalizing... I've picked the style of writing that Julie James follows (no I haven't read novels.. I'm not a prolific reader...but before I wanted to start writing one, I wanted to see how its written so chose one that'd most suit my story).. wherein, capitalizing is an emphasis on that word as you read it
like Even SHE didn't know how much it mattered or Why was there so much pain in her HEAD? etc etc
Hope it was clearer now  Embarassed 
Thanks once again Sumana... big big hug again my dearest mod..  long hug

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Post by lashy on 2014-05-02, 21:14

zuzana wrote:Lashy brilliant  characterisation and the precinct for the story is very good..I just loved the writing style  Clap ...hope kekta gets inspired by such writings...Please continue posting cant wait  bounce

Thanks so much dear...  hpee

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Post by lashy on 2014-05-02, 21:16

PrincessNancy wrote:Btw di.. It is also possible that I am faaltu mein doubting Meera and Payal... jabki the stalker might be totally someone else!! God! You have build it up so cleverly that I find no clue... Bad bad.. very bad di... lol jus kiddin... PLease update part 2 soon...
Dying to know what happens next?
Very bad? Arre baba...  hppy tum bhi na... 
I will update part 2 here today.....Dying to know, eh?  Twisted Evil 

Btw, hope you found the like button.. its just the word like on the left hand corner..

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Post by lashy on 2014-05-02, 21:16

Maria J wrote:wow nice one.. Pls do continue soon...
Thanks dear... putting up part 2 tonight  hpee

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Post by lashy on 2014-05-02, 22:11

Have updated part 2 girlssss  long hug

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Post by sunshine99 on 2014-05-03, 08:14

Thanks for part 2.. The story gets interesting . Waiting for the next part.

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Post by harrybird on 2014-05-03, 08:30

Comments later, Feelings first hpee .....

OMG!!! 

Lashy,I cant believe that this is just your second attempt!

I must say that you are one hell of a writer!!!

 long hug 

Your chapter-I was good, But chapter-II ....DAMN GOOD!!! wanna read all 12 chapters today itself...trying hard to resist! 
 hug1 
chapter-3 as quickly as possible plz !

Harry

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Post by PrincessNancy on 2014-05-03, 11:37

Here comes the stalker.... Damn! Even if you'll wake me up in the middle of the night to recite that message.. I'll recite it word to word... But who d hell sent it?

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Post by PrincessNancy on 2014-05-03, 11:40

lashy wrote:
PrincessNancy wrote:Btw di.. It is also possible that I am faaltu mein doubting Meera and Payal... jabki the stalker might be totally someone else!! God! You have build it up so cleverly that I find no clue... Bad bad.. very bad di... lol jus kiddin... PLease update part 2 soon...
Dying to know what happens next?
Very bad? Arre baba...  hppy tum bhi na... 
I will update part 2 here today.....Dying to know, eh?  Twisted Evil 

Btw, hope you found the like button.. its just the word like on the left hand corner..
Lol... I haven't found the like button yet... There is a 'Likes' thing in the left hand corner... but unable to click on it... anyways..you know na.. NJAPA is my fav FF!

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Post by lashy on 2014-05-03, 14:10

sunshine99 wrote:Thanks for part 2.. The story gets interesting . Waiting for the next part.
Thanks so much dear..  long hug

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Post by SABA KAUNAIN on 2014-05-05, 13:16

Nice

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Post by SABA KAUNAIN on 2014-05-05, 13:21

How to read part 7???? Plz tell fast

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Post by lashy on 2014-05-05, 13:50

harrybird wrote:Comments later, Feelings first hpee .....

OMG!!! 

Lashy,I cant believe that this is just your second attempt!

I must say that you are one hell of a writer!!!

 long hug 

Your chapter-I was good, But chapter-II ....DAMN GOOD!!! wanna read all 12 chapters today itself...trying hard to resist! 
 hug1 
chapter-3 as quickly as possible plz !

Harry
Anjali, there are totally 53 chapters in this FF... and so far in IF I've written 33 parts.. writing 34...have just started pasting them a part at a time here..
its a journey of a conservative middle class young lady...going against the norm of her 'character' going against a lot of what she originally believed in/was - after she found true love...

 :<<:
 
Thanks so much for your compliments dear... and I'm touched...
I've put up part 3 today....will put up part 4 in the next couple of days  hpee


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Post by lashy on 2014-05-05, 13:51

SABA KAUNAIN wrote:Nice
Thanks so much dear.. I've reserved the posts beforehand so that it gives the feeling of a novel when written.. I haven't yet pasted all the parts...
there are 53 in total and so far I've written 33... but, I've only pasted three here...
as written I will put up one every couple of days..  long hug 
thanks so so so much my dearie

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Post by Jiggy on 2014-05-05, 14:12

wooo... lashy
i missed your updates... :(
these exams are going to be the death of me Bang
once again... lovely updates...
i can't believe you aren't a professional writer...
love it
keep it up :)

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Post by radharockzz on 2014-05-05, 20:58

Guys.....i am not able to see any of the parts....where is it...???....which page...??tell me plss......soon...!!

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Re: ~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair ~* Part 10 updated 11th June

Post by lashy on 2014-05-05, 21:09

radharockzz wrote:Guys.....i am not able to see any of the parts....where is it...???....which page...??tell me plss......soon...!!
Dear, did you read the first three parts its on page 1 itself... one after the other..
the rest haven't been posted yet... only been reserved  hpee

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Re: ~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair ~* Part 10 updated 11th June

Post by harrybird on 2014-05-05, 21:41

lashy wrote:
harrybird wrote:Comments later, Feelings first hpee .....

OMG!!! 

Lashy,I cant believe that this is just your second attempt!

I must say that you are one hell of a writer!!!

 long hug 

Your chapter-I was good, But chapter-II ....DAMN GOOD!!! wanna read all 12 chapters today itself...trying hard to resist! 
 hug1 
chapter-3 as quickly as possible plz !

Harry
Anjali, there are totally 53 chapters in this FF... and so far in IF I've written 33 parts.. writing 34...have just started pasting them a part at a time here..
its a journey of a conservative middle class young lady...going against the norm of her 'character' going against a lot of what she originally believed in/was - after she found true love...

 :<<:
 
Thanks so much for your compliments dear... and I'm touched...
I've put up part 3 today....will put up part 4 in the next couple of days  hpee


Honey,
 
I found it exciting, stylish & refreshing.....sorry....couldt resist...went ahead & read all 33 parts! simply brilliant!!! 
 long hug 
waiting for 34!!! curious to know the stalker. But hey remember, I will read once again and comment on it....

Lashy, my honest opinion! You are a gifted writer, Dont waste your talent! you have to publish your work! your writing is on par with any of the successful contemporary authors. I am damn serious....think over!

Harry

PS: Lashy, ur take on today's episode...particularly Jallu's sword fight practising scene....

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