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Post by ..Tahniat.. on 2014-05-05, 21:22

It was a peaceful night, with the moon high up in the sky, the stars twinkling and the cool breeze which played upon their skin. But the situation was quite hot inside the Emperor's chambers. The Emperor and his Queen were busy quarreling with each other about a very small and cute matter. 

"Nahi Shehensha! Wo humse zyada prem karte hai.." "Jodha humse zyada wo mohabbat karte hai.." Jodha frowned. Jalal was quite annoyed as he knew that he loved him the most. "Phir thik hai.. Hum sabit kar dete hai.." spoke Jodha in an angry tone. "Kardijiye Sabit."

The little baby boy was continuously staring at his parents when they were quarreling about him. He pouted. Indeed he was really close to Jodha, but he never went to Jodha when Jalal was around. He would stay in Jalal's arms until he slept peacefully. "Salim beta boliye Abbu.. Abbu boliye.." Salim with his hazel eyes just stared at Jalal.. His eyes are like his Ammi, thought Jalal."Abbu boliye na Salim!" Jalal spoke in a demanding way which made Salim cry.

"Dekha! Rula diya na mere bete ko." Jalal with an innocent face "humne kya kiya?" Jodha smiled watching Jalal's expression. "Hay Bhagwan! Humare do bacche hai ek Salim aur ek bara wala Jalal.." By this time Salim had stopped crying and was busy playing with his mother's necklace.

Now Jalal spoke in a mischievous tone "Lekin pyaar toh aap humse zyada karte hai Jodha begum... Aur wo aapne kaal Raat sabit bhi kardi.." Jodha blushed heavily in embarrassment. "Aap bhi na Shehensha! Kuch bhi kehte hai.." "Aab humne kya kiya? Aapne hi toh.." Jodha put her fingers upon Jalal's lips. "Baas bhi kijiye.. Bacche pe bura Asar parega." Jalal "Asar parne dijiye Jodha" 

Jalal moved his face forward. Jodha was blushing all along, just when Jalal was about to touch Jodha's lips with his, Salim spoke "Ma..mam..Ma" 

Jodha was left surprised. On the other hand Jalal kept clearing up his ears as he wasn't believing of what just took place. Their son just spoke his first words! Tears filled up Jodha's eyes and she became emotional. Jalal lifted Salim up in his arms and said "Mash Allah!" He pressed his lips against Salims's forehead. The baby giggled and excitedly moved his hands and feet. Jodha caressed his face and said "mera baccha!" 


"Salim aab boliye Abbu.. Boliye Abbu..Abbu.. Abbu.." Jodha smiled at Jalal "arey bacche pe zor kyu daal rahe hai?? Usko nindh Araha hai.. Haina beta?" said Jodha lovingly. "Aap Bohot Khush ho rahe hai Jodha??" Jalal spoke with annoyance.

"Kyu na ho?? Humare bte ne Ma kaha." She pecked on Salim's cheek. 

"Khannam pehle Abbu kahegi! Aab Wohi mera sapna pura karegi.. Humari beti.." 

Jodha starts patting Salim and says "Pehle aane toh dijiye..." 

"Pehle toh Hume paas Aana hoga.." 

"Salim ko so Jane dijiye pehle..." 

Jalal winked at Jodha and said "Hum intezaar karenge!"

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Re: AkDha OS ~The First Word~

Post by Jiggy on 2014-05-05, 21:35

me first
wow.... amazing OS dear...
beautifully written Starry Love
that part where jo says bas kijiye, salim pe bura asar padega...
i was rofling thinking 'bura asar pad gaya jo, abhi anarkali ko aane do' ROFL
great job
btw... whats your name ??

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Re: AkDha OS ~The First Word~

Post by ..Tahniat.. on 2014-05-05, 21:39

Jiggy wrote:me first
wow.... amazing OS dear...
beautifully written Starry Love
that part where jo says bas kijiye, salim pe bura asar padega...
i was rofling thinking 'bura asar pad gaya jo, abhi anarkali ko aane do'  ROFL
great job
btw... whats your name ??
Hehe...thankx  long hug 
It's tahniat Jallalluddin Mohammad
U?

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Re: AkDha OS ~The First Word~

Post by aishakapoor on 2014-05-05, 21:40

awww...so cute!!! u noe wat im planning to stop writing my FF...urs are soo good!!!!mine is nothing in front of urs!!!as usual hats off to the imagination!! love it!!! hpee  long hug  Thumbsup  Heart  study

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Re: AkDha OS ~The First Word~

Post by Sanchu on 2014-05-05, 21:50

tahniat jaan...........god swear.................just hav become a fan of ur ff..... Starry Love  Starry Love 

just love ur ff darling................

pls pls keep it uo.& write more...............i just love ur ff.......... Kiss  Kiss  Kiss

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Re: AkDha OS ~The First Word~

Post by Sanchu on 2014-05-05, 21:54

Jiggy wrote:me first
wow.... amazing OS dear...
beautifully written Starry Love
that part where jo says bas kijiye, salim pe bura asar padega...
i was rofling thinking 'bura asar pad gaya jo, abhi anarkali ko aane do'  ROFL
great job
btw... whats your name ??
yaar jiggy kuch sikh isse...hum log to abh tak sirf sr pe hi aatake hue hai....& she had already thought about salim & now khannam.hay.mar jawa......... Starry Love  Starry Love 

by d way jiggs.........now i think if dis serial continues aftr salim's birth............i will be able 2 see it.just 4 tahniat's ff.............. Thumbsup  Thumbsup

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Re: AkDha OS ~The First Word~

Post by Jiggy on 2014-05-05, 22:03

..Tahniat.. wrote:
Jiggy wrote:me first
wow.... amazing OS dear...
beautifully written Starry Love
that part where jo says bas kijiye, salim pe bura asar padega...
i was rofling thinking 'bura asar pad gaya jo, abhi anarkali ko aane do'  ROFL
great job
btw... whats your name ??
Hehe...thankx  long hug 
It's tahniat Jallalluddin Mohammad
U?
oh... aap jalal ki begum hai Clap 
bataiye zara...aaj harem ka kaisa haal hai.....??ROFL rukaiyya theek toh hai na Scared 
you can call me jiggy/ jiggs...whatever strikes your fancy
welcome to dhwani long hug

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Post by Jiggy on 2014-05-05, 22:07

@sanchu
sanchu sanchu meri bholi sanchu
hum sr pe atke hue hai... cos we wanna see it hote huye... ROFL
hum aage ka socj kar... aaj ke enjoyment ko kharab nahi karenge.... slow and steady, gives a steamy sr ROFL ROFL

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Re: AkDha OS ~The First Word~

Post by Sanchu on 2014-05-05, 22:09

Jiggy wrote:
..Tahniat.. wrote:
Jiggy wrote:me first
wow.... amazing OS dear...
beautifully written Starry Love
that part where jo says bas kijiye, salim pe bura asar padega...
i was rofling thinking 'bura asar pad gaya jo, abhi anarkali ko aane do'  ROFL
great job
btw... whats your name ??
Hehe...thankx  long hug 
It's tahniat Jallalluddin Mohammad
U?
oh... aap jalal ki begum hai Clap 
bataiye zara...aaj harem ka kaisa haal hai.....??ROFL rukaiyya theek toh hai na Scared 
you can call me jiggy/ jiggs...whatever strikes your fancy
welcome to dhwani long hug
tu ruqu ki haalalt kyun pooch rahi hai be usse?????agar poochna hi hai to jalluka, unke sheikhubaba ka haalat pooch......

& one more thing.............was khannam jo's daughter?? scratch  scratch

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Re: AkDha OS ~The First Word~

Post by Sanchu on 2014-05-06, 07:44

Jiggy wrote:@sanchu
sanchu sanchu meri bholi sanchu
hum sr pe atke hue hai... cos we wanna see it hote huye... ROFL
hum aage ka socj kar... aaj ke enjoyment ko kharab nahi karenge.... slow and steady, gives a steamy sr  ROFL  ROFL
tu kabhi nehi sudhregi.............. hppy  hppy

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Re: AkDha OS ~The First Word~

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-05-06, 09:21

Hey Tahniat .. This is such an awesome OS my dear ..
long hug Thumbsup 

Loved it .. Please do share more .. I shall be waiting for them yaar
 Starry Love Starry Love Dance 

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Post by Sanchu on 2014-05-06, 09:24

--sumana13-- wrote:Hey Tahniat .. This is such an awesome OS my dear ..
long hug Thumbsup 

Loved it .. Please do share more .. I shall be waiting for them yaar
 Starry Love Starry Love Dance 
kyun????achhi hai na???kya boli thi maine....... hpee  hpee

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Post by candy on 2014-05-06, 09:53

Tahniat.. Starry Love Starry Love loved it yaar
long hug

bacha par bura asar parega hppy

Jo and jalal dialogues Starry Love oh.. My.. Full of Romance.. Heart


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Post by Sanchu on 2014-05-06, 09:55

candy wrote:Tahniat..  Starry Love :*love*:loved it yaar
long hug 

bacha par bura asar parega hppy

Jo and jalal dialogues :*love*:oh.. My.. Full of Romance.. Heart 

candy just think this story with RT &PS..............u'll just love it yaar.......... luv  luv  Starry Love  Starry Love

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Post by candy on 2014-05-06, 10:05

Sanchu.. I imagined with them oly yaar.. Tat naughty jalal dialogues with RT smirking .. Heart


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Re: AkDha OS ~The First Word~

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-05-06, 10:09

Jiggy wrote:@sanchu
sanchu sanchu meri bholi sanchu
hum sr pe atke hue hai... cos we wanna see it hote huye... ROFL
hum aage ka socj kar... aaj ke enjoyment ko kharab nahi karenge.... slow and steady, gives a steamy sr  ROFL  ROFL
Jiggy your are too much
 ROFL ROFL 

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Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-05-06, 10:11

sanchu wrote:
--sumana13-- wrote:Hey Tahniat .. This is such an awesome OS my dear ..
long hug Thumbsup 

Loved it .. Please do share more .. I shall be waiting for them yaar
 Starry Love Starry Love Dance 
kyun????achhi hai na???kya boli thi maine....... hpee  hpee
Sanchu .. I knew we have similarways of thinking as far as romancing goes yaar
 long hug  long hug 
Yaar where is Tahniyat ..we must request her to write some more yaar ..
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Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-05-06, 10:14

sanchu wrote:
candy wrote:Tahniat..  Starry Love :*love*:loved it yaar
long hug 

bacha par bura asar parega hppy

Jo and jalal dialogues :*love*:oh.. My.. Full of Romance.. Heart 

candy just think this story with RT &PS..............u'll just love it yaar.......... luv  luv  Starry Love  Starry Love
Nahiin not RT. &PS .. This has to be in the royal settings of Agra as Jallu and Jo Begum
 Clap Starry Love Dance 

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Post by candy on 2014-05-06, 10:43

Manu.. RT and PS as jalal and Jo.. Correct na

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Post by Sanchu on 2014-05-06, 11:10

--sumana13-- wrote:
sanchu wrote:
candy wrote:Tahniat..  Starry Love :*love*:loved it yaar
long hug 

bacha par bura asar parega hppy

Jo and jalal dialogues :*love*:oh.. My.. Full of Romance.. Heart 

candy just think this story with RT &PS..............u'll just love it yaar.......... luv  luv  Starry Love  Starry Love
Nahiin not RT. &PS .. This has to be in the royal settings of Agra as Jallu and Jo Begum
 Clap Starry Love Dance 
ok ok jalu & jo begum...............i told RT & PS bcoz.............it's natural.when ever we think about jj naturally RT & PS come infront of our eyes as jj.so..........

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Post by Sanchu on 2014-05-06, 11:10

candy wrote:Sanchu.. I imagined with them oly yaar.. Tat naughty jalal dialogues with RT smirking .. Heart 

ya........i also........jj means 2 me RT & PS in thir mughal attire.......... luv  luv  luv

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Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-05-06, 12:14

candy wrote:Manu.. RT and PS as jalal and Jo.. Correct na
Yes Candy I want to imagine them as their reel life characters .. Not real life ones
 hpee 

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