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Post by Tanthya on 2014-05-13, 20:10

The besotted King is pacing  to and fro wearing out the floor, impatiently waiting for  Jodha's arrival, news about how near she has come to Agra.. etc etc.. A sentry  comes to the impatient emperor   , tells him that Jodha has traversed  halfway towards Agra. Jalal euphoria  reaches   the pinnacle, he hands his chain to the messenger  and begins pacing again....  Ruqaiyya wanders towards him.. She feels a slight twinge  as she notices her husband waiting for a woman who had cold shouldered   him and ignoring the woman who has always stood by him..Ruqaiyay walks to Jalal, points out hesitantly  that waiting for Jodha will not get Jodha  in Agra faster. Jalal  bashfully replies  that the news of Jodha's  arrival has sent in a spin ..Ruqaiya feels hurt on hearing it but covers it up ..Just then another messenger comes with the news   that Jodha 's caravan will reach Agra  by noon, next day.. which sends  Jalal into further transports of joy , he promptly gifts this messenger too.. Ruqaiyya  tries to withdraw quietly on the ruse of overseeing  the preparation for  Jodha's welcome. Jalal thanks her for her  gesture  to which Ruqaiyya promptly replies her happiness always rested with his..


Ruqaiyya is seen instructing the servants  .. A few rajvanshi servants are asked to welcome Jodha in Rajvanshi style while opthers are ordered to decorate the place the way Jodha likes it .. The cook is ordered to cook the favourites of Jodha, seeking Moti's help if need arises..

Maham saunters in like a white cloud sliding lazily on summer winds.. Maham , true to her nature  tries to rile up Ruqaiyya  against Jodha, Ruqaiyya points out that it is better to be closer to the enemy and bring about a breach at suitable opportunity rather than  go against  the favourite  n head for a mighty fall like Maham..  The match ends  1-1 ..


MAHAM's Hojra:

Maham is glowering against the world in general, when her precious Son , the lord Brutus comes.. Maham's maternal instinct warms  up.. she notices the suppressed frustration  in his face, on enquiry discovers that Adham is seething at having  to bow down  to a Rajvanshi princess..Maham rather than calming him , adds more fuel .. She points out that Jalal immediate circle of adviser have to be obliterated .. notably  Atgah, Maan Singh, Todar mal & Jodha.. Maham adds  Atgah is the immediate danger to their  goal and he has to be removed forthwith.. Adham listens keenly.


ON THE ROAD TO AGRA

Jodha and  her brothers dismount at a dwelling. Maans singh  comes out, welcoming them.. All are surprised to see Maan Singh and the arrangements he has made ..  Maan Singh reveals that Jalal has sent him to welcome Jodha .

Jodha is astonished and touched .. The entourage enters the private quarters.. Jodha is still bemused at the reason for  Maan Singhs presence , Maan Singh states that it was   Jalal's orders.. Jodha enquires about  Jalal  comes to  know that Jalal  was like a withered flower who has bloomed brillliantly on hearing the news of  her arrival .. Jodha feels shy n embarrassed too.. Jodha says that it was her fault and her stubbornness that got them into such state, where she had gone far  from Hamida, Salima, Rahim..ppl who loveed her from heart.. Shenaz from behind pips ..what about the King?? Jodha shushes her hurriedly..


 NIGHT ADVANCES

Jalal is unable to contain his impatience nor sleep.. Salima  walks to him, amused at his excited state..  Jalal is eager to know how should one welcome a wife back? what should one say and one should not .. Salima points out that love needs no words ... blah blah and that the king ought to sleep  to be up fresh the next day.. Salima departs while Jalal chuckles , says to himself that  SLeep!!! how can one sleep when the beloved is so near..


CAMP

Jodha is staring at the moon, very sure that her husband would not sleep the whole night, She wants the night to end very fast so that she can reach Agra and be with jalal. Jodha realizes that  she was the one who was at fault..


 MORNING


The caravan reaches the palace.. Jodha is welcomed in  Rajvanshi style , flowers are showered on her .. aarti is taken..Hamida hugs Jodha,  sighing that the noor has come  back to the darkened Agra.. Ruqaiyya is jealous while Jodha's eyes keep on searching for  Jalal who is not to be seen anywhere...

 Jodha  after pada puja , steps forwards , takes as tep and like a mist that rises up and vaporized allowing the radiance of 100 suns to bask over your, blinding you, dazzling you..Stands Jalal...looking majestic, a king.. Smiling at her.. The eyes speaking  1000 words per second, exchanging the yearning one felt  for each other..


PRECAP

Jalal hands  a whip to Jodha, asks her to punish him by whipping him..


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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Tanthya on 2014-05-13, 20:24

updating

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by aishakapoor on 2014-05-13, 20:30

they are gonna meet tomorrow!!! its soo obvious!!!

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Tanthya on 2014-05-13, 20:32

updated

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Jiggy on 2014-05-13, 20:37

thanks for the WU tants long hug
it was a good-ish episode...
i only have comments for the precap...
jalal likes it KINKY !!!!! ROFL ROFL ROFL


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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Tanthya on 2014-05-13, 20:43

Jiggy wrote:thanks for the WU tants  long hug
it was an okayish episode...
i only have comments for the precap...
jalal likes it KINKY !!!!!  ROFL  ROFL  ROFL
 long hug


U are welcome, Love....

 Yup...too much on Ahwani's   and flowers .. 



Trsut u to pick up on that  hppy  hppy  hppy

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by candy on 2014-05-13, 20:49

Sathya begum .. Loved your update. Thanks.. Loved the description for jalal
long hug

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by candy on 2014-05-13, 20:50

Jiggy..
Jo wore pink dress today yaar.. Not for shivani marriage it seems..

Do you remember those off screen pics..

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Jiggy on 2014-05-13, 20:56

@candy
yeah... i remember
btw... was it only me or was the jo's khema and jalal's night-wait scenes superbly shot....?? reminded me of the olden JA days...both were so impatient to see other.
i'm so happy for my JoJa Starry Love
and i loved jo's dialogues in her khema... for me... these two are unconditionally in love... and i can't help but bask in their happiness...
uff.... i'm going senti... Bang Clap
(P.S candy, your thoughts on the EMA disaster on masti thread ??)

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by harrybird on 2014-05-13, 21:00

Jiggy wrote:thanks for the WU tants  long hug
it was an okayish episode...
i only have comments for the precap...
jalal likes it KINKY !!!!!  ROFL  ROFL  ROFL

OMG! My stomach hurts.... 50 SHADES OF JALAL???

ROFL  ROFL  ROFL

PS: I liked Jo hojra's decoration....perfect setting!


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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Sanchu on 2014-05-13, 21:01

guys...........i felt sorry 4 jalal.........bechara pyaar mein pagal ho chuka hai............raat raat bhar neend nehi ata hai bechareko..... hppy  hppy ...........the main reason of his tired eyes......... Wink  Wink 

i was scared..........yeh jalal over-excitement ke chakkar mein  jo ko sabke saamne hug hi na kar baithe...... ROFL  ROFL 
b8 thank god........nothing happened like that.......... lazee  lazee 

& one thing..........ruqu's new dress was pretty na.............. nty  nty 

& jalal...........kya aap apne biwi se hunter khana chahte ho??????kya aap apni begum mein hunterwali talent dekhna chahate ho???good one...... ROFL  ROFL 

sathya ..............awesome wu darling...fabulous.........

precap dekhkar mujhe aisa kyun laga ki humein kal hi jj hug dekhne ko mil sakta hain?????khair jane do.....humare SR wish iss janam mein to pure hone se raha..... Sleep  Sleep

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Nanayaa623 on 2014-05-13, 21:20

Tanthya, always as lovely and fun to read the updates you make it so interesting to read. I love this one below and made so improvise. Thanks
 long hug 

Maham saunters in like a white cloud sliding lazilyi(and all witchyEvil or Very Mad  on summer wind

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by clarissasham on 2014-05-13, 21:28

Jalal pagla gaya gain

Moti was the only haddi in kabab now one more shehnaz .  ....

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by shobita on 2014-05-13, 21:53

Jiggy wrote:thanks for the WU tants  long hug
it was an okayish episode...
i only have comments for the precap...
jalal likes it KINKY !!!!!  ROFL  ROFL  ROFL
  ROFL 

Now I understand Jo's expression in the precap  hppy

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by shobita on 2014-05-13, 21:56

Thanks for the update Tantya .....i luved Jo and Ja's expressions in the last scene

Jalal's eyes said it all

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Giannita63 on 2014-05-13, 22:29

Well Im still in WOOOHOOOO, Cloud 9 mood!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

 Heart  Heart  Dance  Starry Love

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-05-13, 23:30

harrybird wrote:
Jiggy wrote:thanks for the WU tants  long hug
it was an okayish episode...
i only have comments for the precap...
jalal likes it KINKY !!!!!  ROFL  ROFL  ROFL

OMG! My stomach hurts.... 50 SHADES OF JALAL???

ROFL  ROFL  ROFL

PS: I liked Jo hojra's decoration....perfect setting!
@ blue OMGEE Harry & Jiggy I cant stop Rofling 
 ROFL  ROFL  ROFL

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Tanthya on 2014-05-13, 23:33

aishakapoor wrote:they are gonna meet tomorrow!!! its soo obvious!!!

yup.. Today only sight seeing  Wink  Wink

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Sam_0506 on 2014-05-13, 23:38

Jiggy wrote:thanks for the WU tants  long hug
it was a good-ish episode...
i only have comments for the precap...
jalal likes it KINKY !!!!!  ROFL  ROFL  ROFL
 ROFL  ROFL  ROFL  ROFL
Jiggy, Jodha Beghum a dominatrix??  hppy 

Itni anuchit tatha ghrinit baat??

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Tanthya on 2014-05-13, 23:39

Sam_0506 wrote:
Jiggy wrote:thanks for the WU tants  long hug
it was a good-ish episode...
i only have comments for the precap...
jalal likes it KINKY !!!!!  ROFL  ROFL  ROFL
 ROFL  ROFL  ROFL  ROFL
Jiggy, Jodha Beghum a dominatrix??  hppy 

Itni anuchit tatha ghrinit baat??
 hppy  hppy  hppy  hppy

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Jiggy on 2014-05-13, 23:44

@sam
you a psychic or what ??
when i saw the precap first thing in my mind was jo as a dominatrix
ROFL ROFL

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Sam_0506 on 2014-05-13, 23:47

Tanthya wrote:
aishakapoor wrote:they are gonna meet tomorrow!!! its soo obvious!!!

yup.. Today only sight seeing  Wink  Wink
but that sight seeing was kinda cute too.. Both of them eager to see each other. He all proud smiles and she all shy smiles..

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Sam_0506 on 2014-05-13, 23:51

Jiggy wrote:@sam
you a psychic or what ??
when i saw the precap first thing in my mind was jo as a dominatrix
ROFL  ROFL
As they say great minds think alike.. hppy

But looking at Jodha's reaction in the pre-cap, I felt Jalal will first have to tell her what's what.. She would be clueless  ROFL OMG, can you actually imagine such a scene between Jodha and Jalal???????????? I can  Twisted Evil  Twisted Evil  Twisted Evil  Twisted Evil  Twisted Evil

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Jiggy on 2014-05-13, 23:59

Sam_0506 wrote:
Tanthya wrote:
aishakapoor wrote:they are gonna meet tomorrow!!! its soo obvious!!!

yup.. Today only sight seeing  Wink  Wink
but that sight seeing was kinda cute too.. Both of them eager to see each other. He all proud smiles and she all shy smiles..
it WAS adorably intense... Starry Love
and we usually get good episodes on wednesday... soooooooo... Wink

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Re: JOdha Akabr Written Update 13th May

Post by Jiggy on 2014-05-14, 00:02

@sam
you can ? imagine such a scene...?? hppy
sorry... though jo's image as a dominatrix did come in my subconscious brain but she actually behaving as one...
no no... it seems more apt for benazir-mali hppy
actually... it IS more apt for ben-mali
bet they had those whips and other assorted hanky-panky related stuff in an obscure dungeon in mali's palace... ROFL ROFL
this conversation is icreasing the adult rating levels... Clap

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