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Post by slmu on 2014-06-28, 21:11

Jodha Akbar 28th June 2014 Written Episode



Scene 1
jodha in beginning says some beautiful lines for women and on women power. jodha says today is a special day as women have colors and fights both, our battle field is our house and our society, even small fights teaches you lesson, we are with you in fight, she hits an arrow on target and says why women are at target always, we will not accept the disrespect of women ever.


episode starts with jalal and atgah, todar, jalal says send letter to maan and mirza that I am happy with their dedication and work, atgah says someone attacked you and investigation is on. jalal says I know but I will sit in cabin to save myself, I have to take decision about governments, jalal ask todar something but todar is lost, jalal ask is everything fine, todar sees jodha and shehnaz coming, jalal looks at jodha and smiles, all greets jodha, todar and atgah leaves, shehnaz leaves too, jalal ask jodha to sit with him in garden. otherside todar follows shehnaz.


jalal says whenever I go with you somewhere, something good happens, jodha ask what you mean? jalal says look todar, I didn’t find such loyal and nice person before but when I went with you I get to know him, when he came here the government is going good, he takes care of my security too, he is a diamond, jodha says you are right, can I say something, jalal says yes, she says my father made me learn about politics and war but the best thing is that fruit will be good if seed is good, water will be good if ground is good and if a king is good then nation will also be good with him, jalal says you praise very well, thanks fro praising, thank god you are not a poet else all poets would have gone home.


shehnaz thinks that I have to go in jalal’s room to find about the way to my mother and also I can get treasure map, shehnaz goes towards jalal’s room, todar follows her.


she comes to his room but soldiers stop her, she thinks how to go in. she sneakingly goes in, todar sees it, shehnaz goes in jalal’s room from window, todar follows her in, one dasi sees him going and thinks why he is going like this in jalal’s room.


jalal and jodha are playing chess, jalal says you play well but why you don’t play with real people as knights, jodha says I never played it so I get confused. jodha says I am feeling sleepy, I am going, jalal starts coughing, jodha says look I told you that you will feel cold, jalal, jalal says what to do I don’t have bandhi tooat this time, if you say yes then I will stay here, jodha says what if I say no, jalal then I will forcefully stay here, he keeps coming closer to her, jodha says I will go in court and will complain to king about you, jalal says you will complain about me to me, what you will say, jodha says I will say that jalal came in my room and.. jalal says what? jodha blushes, jodha says this is stubbornness, jalal says then tell me how to love, I listen to you in all things, if you say then I will stay here else will go, jalal says I want to show love but not to force it on you, jalal says if you want then I will leave, jodha stops him holding his hand, (in ankhon main plays) as they share an eyelock. jalal comes close to her to kiss but Rahim comes and says I will sleep with you today, I want to listen story from you, salima comes and says sorry jalal, Rahim lets go I will tell you story, jodha is talking with jalal. jodha says no I will tell him story, jalal makes face like what the hell, jodha tells Rahim stories, jalal points her to ask him to go, jodha says no with her eyes wide open, Rahim says why are making me afraid with your wide eyes. jodha says the devil of story, he shows his big eyes to make queen afraid, I was telling about it, jalal says now I am sleepy, Rahim go and sleep, Rahim says I have to listen two more stories, you go and sleep, jalal makes sad face to jodha.


Scene 2
shenaz is searching jalal’s room to find the map of treasure, todar hiding sees her, she comes out, resham comes infront of her but shehnaz goes she then sees todar coming and ask do you need anything, he says no resham I was just checking, he leaves too.


shehnaz sees one map she took from jalal’s room, she says it doesn’t look like treasure map, someone knocks door, she burns the map and opens the door, todar comes there, she greets him and says you came to play with me? he says what is burning here, your game is finished, shehnaz says I will make eye liner from it so burned this paper, he says don’t lie, I had seen you going in jalal’s room, she says no I was searching jalal only, he says no you has stolen some documents tell me, shehnaz says I will not go there but don’t scold me.


jodha says to jalal that Rahim looks cute while sleeping, she calls moti and ask her to take Rahim to salima, she takes him and leaves, jalal says now give me sometime too, I thought that Rahim will not sleep today and we will not get time, jalal lies in her lap and says you will call me poet but your hairs are think jungle and I get lost in it, jodha says you sa good poetry I thought you are only warrior, a warrior who doesn’t have heart and now he is reciting poetries. jalal says I am praising you and you are saying this, they listen someone crying and comes out to see. jodha and jalal comes to shehnaz who is crying incoherently, jalal is shocked to see her clothes being torn, jalal ask what happened shehnaz, jodha drapes shawl around her, shehnaz says he beat me, he molested me,he was assaulting me, jalal ask who ws he, she says the one who is always with you, the fair color, she cries. jalal orders to bring all man in court.



Scene 3
all are in court, adham sasy to sharif what the hell why we are called at this hour, jalal comes there with shehnaz, hamida ask what happened why did you call us this late, jalal says because this never happened, someone tried to assault a innocent girl, the one who is a child by mind, someone tried to R*pe her that too in my palace, all are stunned, jalal says he is one the minister that’s why I called you all here, he sys shehnaz tell me, don’t be afraid I am with you, I will punish him, ruks says yes, tell us, don’t be afraid, we are with you, we will not tolerate this with a women. jodha says yes if the culprit gets save today then he can do this again, jalal says I will give him such a punishment that he will never think of it again ever, eh ask to recognize the man, he ask is it adham, maham is tensed, shehnaz says no. jalal ask then is it sharif. jalal comes to todar but doesn’t ask about him but shehnaz stops and says he is the one, all are shocked, jalal sasy no shehnaz you are mistaken, todar cant be the one, todar say this girl is lying, maham says why will she lie, she doesn’t have any animosity against you, jalal says are you sure he is the one, she says yes, he is the one, he is very bad, he torn my clothes, he had beaten me and.. she runs to jodha and says he is very bad jalal, give him punishment, jalal says atgah bring todar to my room, I wanna talk to him, jalal says don’t worry , you will get justice shehnaz, he leaves. shehnaz cries while all are tensed with the turns of events.


Scene 4
jodha takes shehnaz to her room and gives her water while shehnaz cries,
jalal says to todar that I don’t doubt you but why you didn’t tell me, todar says I didn’t have any proof, her hand was burnt so I got doubt on her, then I came to know that she isn’t mad, she just pretend to be, todar says to when I followed her today, she came to your room and was finding something, she is planning something.


jodha says not to worry shehnaz what if he is todar, I will make sure you get justice, I cant believe that todar can do this.


jalal says don’t know what will happen now, how will you prove that she is lying, todar says all is in your hand now, you have to know what she wants, why she is doing this, jalal says I am sorry and says you have to be in prison, I have to take this decision in court.



Scene 5
mahaC comes and beg praise her that you are beautiful as witch, she ask beautiful or witch? she says praise me. he says you are beautiful and powerful too. mahaC says now I am happy. you can see without eyes, he says bride looks good in marriage, she says if all use brain like you then eyes wont be needed. she sits and nikaah starts, priest ask that haider mahaC will owner of your everything, you accept this marriage, he says qubool hai(I accept), he then ask mahaC, she says I accept this marriage, nikaah is done, pries says now haider is husband of mahaC. all congrats haider but he is not happy. mahaC says this marriage is political alliance so I want it to be secret, so I want that priests will be in my prison till I want, they say what, this is not right, beg says they mean that they are accepting it, mahaC says good take them inside and they are our guests, beg ask soldiers to take them, they goes. haider goes with mahaC. mahaC’s daughter says she is looking like witch.



Scene 6
jalal comes to jodha, jalal says I want to talk about shehnaz, jalal says todar is investigating who had put poison in my turban, he doubts that shehnaz did that, he thinks that she just pretend to be mad, jodha sasy I respect him but that doesn’t mean he will say ill about anyone, he did crime and now saying this, jalal says he also said that he caught shehnaz that’s why she cooked story, jodha says you thik that innocent shehnaz will say lie about her R*pe, jalal says I am just telling you, jodha says today todar is saying that shehnaz put poison yesterday he was doubting zakira and then he will say I did that, jalal I saw todar going behind shehnaz and also he was pulling shehnaz’a dupatta, jalal says he was investigating so he couldn’t answer you, jodha say what investigation? why he didn’t inform you about it earlier, he is saying this to save himself, jalal says shehnaz is not mad, jodha says I know her from Mathura then in amer I was with her then In agra, I cant believe this, jalal says I believe todar, jodha sasy I believe my eyes, cant you see her state, don’t you pity on her, jalal says I cant ignore todar too, she says you cant ignore his act too, jalal says I am finding out truth, jodha say what about pain of her, she will have to bear questions but I want truth to come out, jalal says you stay out of this, jodha sasy no this is matter of respect of women, I know todar did a lot for saltant but think if it was me, salima or ruks in place shehnaz then would you be silent like this, I am worried for shehnaz..she is telling truth and I will not leave her and for that if I have to go against you then I will go, jalal is hurt and curtly looks at her, he leaves from there.



Scene 7
in court, all are present, jalal comes there, atgah says we got complaint that todar tried to R*pe shehnaz, todar comes there, jalal ask shehnaz to come infront and say what she has to, shehnaz looks at jodha is afraid, jodha gets up and takes shehnaz to jalal, jodha says shehnaz is weak so I will say in place of her, jalal says go ahead, she says I am thankful to todar that he gave us home in Mathura but that doesn’t mean he can disrespect women, atgah ask shehnaz did he assaulted you, she says I will never talk to him, he is bad, he torn my clothes, jalal ask todar to say something, todar says she is lying, I never looked at her this way, I cant even think of it, jalal ask shehnaz do you have any proof that he misbehaved with you, jodha says I have seen him around shehnaz many times and one day I saw shehnaz’s dupatta in todar’s hand, and not even me but moti was also present there, todar says I was just giving back her dupatta, dasi says I had seen todar going in your room by window, he says I was following her, jodha says he came in harem too and resham have seen it, todar says I am sorry for going in harem, jodha says 1st zakira was doubted by him and now he thinks that shehnaz did that, who cant even think beyond a kid and if that’s true what he says then why he didn’t inform you, he was I collecting proofs, jodha says what was the need to go in her room in night, todar says I didn’t wanted to this investigation to come out in open, jodha says a mad girl cant lie, todar says but she is not mad, jodha says I know shehnaz well so don’t blame her, jalal says enough, todar you have any proof that shehnaz went in my room, do you have any proof that she is not mad that she put poison, do you accept your crime? he says no I was just investigating, jalal says all proofs are against you, todar says the blame on me is wrong, jalal says you are saying you didn’t R*pe her? todar says no, I did mistake to put zakira in jail, jodha says when he had doubt on moti and zakirs he took your permission to investigate but why not in case of shehnaz, jalal says I am asking him, he ask do any point to doubt shehnza, he says her hands her burnt like me, jodha says it was with hot water, todar says it doesn’t look like it is burnt with hot water but with poison, jalal calls doc and he checks her hand, doc says shehnaz’s hand are burnt with hot water, jodha says now truth is in open, I want justice.Jodha says no one has the right to insult anyone. Jalal says i would like all the judges to make any decision tomorrow but till then todarmal will be in detention. Jodha is in her room. She says we women keep quite but that doesn’t mean that we don’t have a tongue. We like to fly in open skies with open minds. But we’re captivated by rituals. Why the systems wants us to be detained. Its our right to live with respect. Never think that you’re alone. Your voice has the power to change the world. If we can do make overs in front of this mirror. We can also then we can teach the systems.

No precap..






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Re: Jodha Akbar - Written Update - 28 June 2014 - Mahaepisode

Post by Shesherkobita on 2014-06-28, 21:20

Thank you so much

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Post by slmu on 2014-06-28, 21:50

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Post by Shesherkobita on 2014-06-28, 21:53

Shahnaz  Bang Bang maham C  Bang Bang

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Re: Jodha Akbar - Written Update - 28 June 2014 - Mahaepisode

Post by shobita on 2014-06-28, 22:17

Thanks for the update Shanti!

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Re: Jodha Akbar - Written Update - 28 June 2014 - Mahaepisode

Post by Nanayaa623 on 2014-06-28, 22:18

Thanks Shanthi,



CV team Bang  Bang  Bang  on a serious note now this is not funny what the …. is that all about really do you need Rahim to spoil our weekend for us with your cheap games. If you are not read to give us second SR stop teasing.

More so I always have problem with the ideas and dialogues; you started the concept very well focusing on women’s power however IF the said act of R*pe was true then this episode would have made sense and a wonderful episode  but since the act was not committed I think your heading and closing dialogues is absurd. Rolling Eyes  Rolling Eyes  Rolling Eyes  Rolling Eyes  Are you trying to say that any woman have the right to just level untrue accusation on a man and get justice for that? scratch  scratch  scratch 

 Shout out  Shout out  Shout out  Shout out  Shout out  Shout out It would have been better to go ahead and show your crap without those lectures

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Re: Jodha Akbar - Written Update - 28 June 2014 - Mahaepisode

Post by Shesherkobita on 2014-06-28, 22:43

Nanayaa623 wrote:Thanks Shanthi,



CV team Bang  Bang  Bang  on a serious note now this is not funny what the …. is that all about really do you need Rahim to spoil our weekend for us with your cheap games. If you are not read to give us second SR stop teasing.

More so I always have problem with the ideas and dialogues; you started the concept very well focusing on women’s power however IF the said act of R*pe was true then this episode would have made sense and a wonderful episode  but since the act was not committed I think your heading and closing dialogues is absurd. Rolling Eyes  Rolling Eyes  Rolling Eyes  Rolling Eyes  Are you trying to say that any woman have the right to just level untrue accusation on a man and get justice for that? scratch  scratch  scratch 

 Shout out  Shout out  Shout out  Shout out  Shout out  Shout out It would have been better to go ahead and show your crap without those lectures

Completely agree with you, why did they show that bhashaan, it just didn't make any sense?  scratch given the context of false accusations ... Now officially Jodha is the Bhashan Queen!  Evil or Very Mad 

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Re: Jodha Akbar - Written Update - 28 June 2014 - Mahaepisode

Post by Giannita63 on 2014-06-28, 23:02

Daaaaaaaaaaaaamn!!!!!!!!!!

CAN SOMEBODY JUST THROW A BOMB ON THESE STUUUUPIIIID CV'S/EKTA OFFICES?????????

What an IDIOTIC way of ruining a great show!!!! I can see now how all Jodha haters will start yielding at her forgetting she doesnt write her lines and dialogues herself!!!

I'm HELL pissed off, I better quit this show soon for my own peace of mind!!!  Bang Bang Bang Embarassed Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad 

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Re: Jodha Akbar - Written Update - 28 June 2014 - Mahaepisode

Post by shobita on 2014-06-29, 10:20

Nanayaa623 wrote:Thanks Shanthi,



CV team Bang  Bang  Bang  on a serious note now this is not funny what the …. is that all about really do you need Rahim to spoil our weekend for us with your cheap games. If you are not read to give us second SR stop teasing.

More so I always have problem with the ideas and dialogues; you started the concept very well focusing on women’s power however IF the said act of R*pe was true then this episode would have made sense and a wonderful episode  but since the act was not committed I think your heading and closing dialogues is absurd. Rolling Eyes  Rolling Eyes  Rolling Eyes  Rolling Eyes  Are you trying to say that any woman have the right to just level untrue accusation on a man and get justice for that? scratch  scratch  scratch 

 Shout out  Shout out  Shout out  Shout out  Shout out  Shout out It would have been better to go ahead and show your crap without those lectures
I agree with you 100% Nanayaa......it is absurdity of the worst order to have a speech on supporting women on the issue of sexual assault when the episode is about a woman lying about the incident to hide her devious motives........Her bhaashan would have made sense during that Tasneem track but here it was totally mistimed and uncalled for.

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Re: Jodha Akbar - Written Update - 28 June 2014 - Mahaepisode

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-06-29, 12:09

Nanayaa623 wrote:Thanks Shanthi,



CV team Bang  Bang  Bang  on a serious note now this is not funny what the …. is that all about really do you need Rahim to spoil our weekend for us with your cheap games. If you are not read to give us second SR stop teasing.

More so I always have problem with the ideas and dialogues; you started the concept very well focusing on women’s power however IF the said act of R*pe was true then this episode would have made sense and a wonderful episode  but since the act was not committed I think your heading and closing dialogues is absurd. Rolling Eyes  Rolling Eyes  Rolling Eyes  Rolling Eyes  Are you trying to say that any woman have the right to just level untrue accusation on a man and get justice for that? scratch  scratch  scratch 

 Shout out  Shout out  Shout out  Shout out  Shout out  Shout out It would have been better to go ahead and show your crap without those lectures
Absolutely right Nanayaa ....we'll said 
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Re: Jodha Akbar - Written Update - 28 June 2014 - Mahaepisode

Post by Nanayaa623 on 2014-06-29, 18:58

Sabi, Shobita, Manu, mi ladies, long hug  am glad I was not the only one who felt that way.

Thanks to Sabi Kiss  for introducing me to IPKKND it helped my mood after a disappointing Maha wahala

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Re: Jodha Akbar - Written Update - 28 June 2014 - Mahaepisode

Post by Nanayaa623 on 2014-06-29, 19:04

Giannita63 wrote:Daaaaaaaaaaaaamn!!!!!!!!!!

CAN SOMEBODY JUST THROW A BOMB ON THESE STUUUUPIIIID CV'S/EKTA OFFICES?????????

What an IDIOTIC way of ruining a great show!!!! I can see now how all Jodha haters will start yielding at her forgetting she doesnt write her lines and dialogues herself!!!

I'm HELL pissed off, I better quit this show soon for my own peace of mind!!!  Bang Bang Bang Embarassed Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad 
Giannita, at bold, that is sad Evil or Very Mad  Evil or Very Mad  Evil or Very Mad  but it happens. long hug  I am curious to see how the CV team  Bang are going to bring their character Jodha out of the mess they created for her with dialogues; hope it doesn't get worse.

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