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Post by smile.sara on 2014-07-14, 06:20

prologue


shahnsha humayu the son of babar e azam was King with no land, 
roaming in the desert of sindh with his two wife (his first wife bega begam and newly wedded  pregnant hamida bano begum) and some loyal friends and soldiers.


bega begum his first wife and cheif queen just lost her 8 year daughter ...shahzadi aqiqa sultan while she and other wifes of humayu were imprison to sher shah after war btw mughal army and sher khan army at chausa bengal ...although sher shah treated these royal ladies well and sent them back to humayu with proper protocol in the care of his trusted general ...but he lost her daughter in btw this mess .. although bega begum herself not in good condition due to  this huge lost, she was trying to take care her husband and his pregnant wife but obviously it was not enough ..


humyun was heir less yet ...although he never said but he needs son 


..hamida was a very young girl and new bride ...bega begum knew this well so trying to help, consol and take care  her.


shansha babar's other son were in their repectIVE kingdoms granted by humayu to rule independently Under mughal flag ACCORDING TO THEIR FATHER will.


sultan mirza kamran was rulling kabul.


his real brother sultan mirza askari was ruling kandhar .


youngest and apple  of  babar eyes..sultan mirza hindal was in gazni 
none of humayuu brother was intended to help him in these hard times
kamran mirza was most cunning, greedy .


askari had a weak personality ...he was totally in influence of his elder brother kamran. 


both of them think that now humayu lost hindustan he must be wanted to get back babar initial terotary from them.

Hindal mirza was the favorite of his father ...most handsome, courageous wise and warrior among his brothers but right now he believed that humayu lost  his empire due to his over  superstious nature. he was not greedy of power but under certain circumstaces he was bound to think tht humayu is not capable to take care of such huge reponsibility ...according to him his edler brother was not worthy king.


and lastly ... humuyu the eldest brother 


who  was very superstious ... dont take any step without zodiac signals...
very kind heartened  and forgiving which is usually not wise for king ... not much courageous and not a goood administrator and nor a great warrior  off course ... but he was a good man for sure ..


Character sketch a this stage of story


HUMAYU:




BAIGA BEGUM-- 
HUMAYU FIRST WIFE AND CHIEF QUEEN ... SHE IS ALSO HIS FIRST COUSIN... 


hAMEEDA bANO bEGUM-- 
HUMAYU NEWest  AND LAST WIFE TILL THIS STAGE OF STORY... SHE IS EXPECTING ... SHE WAS LADY IN WAITING OF DILDAR BEGUM... HUMAYU STEP MOM AND BABAR's SECOND CHIEF WIFE AFTER MAHAM BEGUM WHO WAS HIS CHEIF QUEEN AND HUMAYU MOTHER


dILDAR bEGUM-- 
SHE IS  HUMAYU STEP MOM AND BABAR SECOND CHIEF WIFE AFTER MAHAM BEGUM ... SHE IS VERY HUMBLE AND WISE LADY ... SHE IS MOTHER OF MIRZA HINDAL AND GULBANDAN BANO ... SHE SUPPORTED HUMAYU WHOLE HEARTEDY EVEN WHEN BABAR WAS ABOUT TO CONSIDER MAKING MIRZA HIDAL his heir ... HUMAYU HAD GREAT LOVE AND RESPECT FOR HER... HAMIDA BANO ALSO RESPECTS HER ALOT...SHE  AND MIRZA HINDAL WERE GURDIANS OF HER BEFORE HER WEDDING in Hindal harem under his mother dildar begum.


DILDAR BEGUM HAS GOOD KNOWLEDE OF medicine AND HIKMAT... SHE WAS MASTER IN HOUSE HOLD WORKs AND OTHER HOMELY DUTIES AS SHE WAS LADY IN WAITING OF HER MOTHER IN LAW IN  HER LAST DAYS ...AND IT WAS BABAR'S MOM WILL THT BABR SHOULD MARRY HER . She was also distant relative of his husband ..babar e Azam 


kHANZADA bEGUM... SHE WAS THE ELDER SISTER OF HUMAYU ..HIGHLY RESPECTABLE fOR WHOLE MUGHAL FAMILY ...HER OPINION AND DECISIONs are REALLY MATTERed... SHE WAS WIFE OF MAHDI kHUaJA ..ONE OF MENTOR , lOYAL FRIEND, GENERAL AND COMPAION of bABAR..SHE IS CHILDLESS BUT RAISE HER YOUNGEST SISTER IN LAW khadeeja SULTAN BEGUM AS HER OWn DAUGHTER .. 


KhAdeeja SULTAN BEGUM WEDED WITH MIRZA HINDAL ... SO KHANNZADA BEGUM WAS NOT ONLY AUNT (PHUPHI) OF HINDAL MIRZA BUT ALSO LIKE MOTHER IN LAW TO HIM...
KHANZADA BEGUM AND DILDAR BEGUM ARE ALSO VERY CLOSE TO EACH OThER... AS WHN BABAR N KHNAZADA MOM tUKHLAQ NIGAR KHATOON  DIED ...KHANZADA WAS  HOSTAGE WIFE -----SHE WAS NOT WITH HER MOTHER.  DILADAR BEGUM TOOK LOTS OF CARE IN LAST DAYS OF KHANZADA MOM..


hINDAL MiRZA - 
hindal mirza and hameeda bano was emotionaly involve with each other whn humayu put his proposal... hindal was already annoyed with humayu bec he thought tht he is not wise and capable king...so as co - guardian also he was not intended to except this proposal nor hamida bano was agreed to be queen of exiled king ... BUt hindal mother and humayu step mother dildar begum ever geneoreous lady who always supported humayu as right ful heir of her husband, emperor babarr... did make hindal understand and hence eventually made hamida agree to marry  humayu
 
kAMRAN mIRZA--
 he has a 3 yr old son mirza ibrahim as his heir


ASKARI MIRZA --- his wife is very generous woman ... they are childless 


mAHAM aNGA ---
 maham , her husband khuaja gazi and her 2 year old son adham khan was also with humayu small karavan ... 


maham was very clever woman , knew how to make ways ... 
she was also very intellegent and HER foresight  WAS also strong... 


khuaja ghazi her husband was simple and religious  man... when hameeda bano and jiji anga both got pregnant simeltaneously... maham anga got worried ...she wanted despretely to be a mother... her six scense was telling her tht no matter what she should be the nurse maid of humayu son ... so after constant knocking on her husband head she was succeded to become pregnant after some moths of hamida bano and jiji anga pregnancy ... now she has no care of her husband , adham or  any other thing ... she was just in her dream land to become anga of future king of mughal empire .. 


jIJI aNGA...
Her name was roshan.. she was very pious lady ...she was wife of shams u din khan who was very loyal, and trusted subject of humayu ... He was also a good friend of his king and very brave and capable soldier... Jiji anga was also expecting and in her full terms.


SHAMSUDIN kHAN


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bAIRAM kHAN---


his real name was Mirza Bairam baig ... He was very fierce warrior and very loyal to Mughal empire since babar time. He was military genius, very brave and courageous man   ... He was army chief of humayu troops  hence called... Bairam khan khan e khana... He was Shia Muslim unlike Mughals who were Sunnis ...


Bairam khan was very ambitious person ... He believed in action ... He doesn't believe in forgiving the enemy or giving enemy another chance ... Unlike his king humayun always looked towards right time, astrology, peace treaty and peace talks ... He can be cruel but not diplomate.


rAJA vEER sAAL -- 


raja veel saal was king of amar kot sindh ...he was one of humayu friends ... his father was the ruller of tat.tha   under babar kingship ... but after seigh of dehli by sher shah ... shah Husain who was one of afghan sardar and sher khan supporter seiged tattha sindh and took wast area of rana veel saal territory in his control... In tht unfortunate war raja veer saal lost his father and eventually became ruller  of amer kot ...the left kingdom.


shah hussain was cruel man... he was father in law of kamran mirza... hence kamran mirza was supporting shah hssain and sher khan infront of his own brother and king 




jAUHAR -- 
he is loyal friend and subject of humayu ... his one of support in these hard times...he is writting his life experiances with humayu and his hard ships.. He is father of 3 old boy Abdul 


tARDI bAIG --
 he was one of general of humayu army... he was rich and greeedy man ... 
Following characters detail will be given in first chapter.


Raja Bharmal 
Maina Vati ... Bharmal  new wife
Padmawati.. Bharmal first wife... Mother of Bhagwan Daas 
Rani apoorva Devi... Bharmal mom 



and many more

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Re: ~~ FF ,!!, Shah Naama ;; “ The Admired-of-the-World,”

Post by smile.sara on 2014-07-14, 06:22

CHAPTR 1


Amber 


amber was small but a power full state of Rajputana... these days political situations of state were not stable... after the strong reign of raja prithviraj ...amber has lost his two kings simertaneously in some couple of years... 
the eldest son of raja prithvirraj ... raja puran mal died after 3 years of his king ship while fighting for mghal emperor humayu ... he was succeeded by his younger brother bhimsingh ...bhim singh also lost his life in war from some neighboring rajput staes... , since couple of months ... ratan Singh , the eldest son of bhimsingh was sitting on the throne...
Bhim singh was elder real brother of bharmal. bharmal was third son raja prithviraaj ..
raja puran mal had also a son ...sujamal who at the time of his father demise was mere age of 8 ...now he was still young as he was 12...although puran mal was elder than bhimsingh but bhim singh sons were older than suja mal ...so after bhim singh his elder son ratan singh who was 17 year old sitting on throne ...bhimsingh younger son karan singh was 16 
nobels of amer court was not happy with ratan singh... They believed  he was too young and for them still suja mal was rightful heir of amer throne.


suja mal was kind hearted but  very sensitive and short tempered boy... in this small age he suffered alot, he had good knowledge of   Sword fight , archery, spear, and all other war traits according to his age... He was very genius boy but very lonely in his life which made him impatient and depressed ..


Bharmal had two wifes padmavati and mainavati
from padmavati he has two sons , bhagwan daas and jagan naat
bhagwan daas was 8 year old and jagan naath was 5
maina vati was expecting these day ...she has her full terms
bharmal younger brother raam singh also raised by bharmal mom, rani apoorva devi ... raam singh has two sons, 
raj singh 5
kanghar singh 3


Ram Singh ( raj Singh , khangar Singh father) was very close to apoorva Devi and bharmal.


chap 1 -- goddess of fortune 
part 1
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(Godness of fortune does not fortunate for herself but blesses  people around them ... Here goddess of fortune ...kismat ki Devi...is coming in form of an angel in her parents life.)


shaam ka samay tha ... amer palace mae raaj parivar shaam ka nashta kr rahe thae
mardo aur aurto ki bhaithak ( sitting ) alag alag hoti thi... 


17 sala maharaja ratan singh was not with them ... he felt small among his uncles and other elders 
but his mother now raj mata purva devi was on 9th cloud since her husband bhim singh became king by luck ... although she is now widow but ratan singh had not married yet so as queen mother she was still most powerfull woman among all 
maina vati was resting in her room ... midwife told her tht she needs to be careful any time she can deliver her baby..
padmawati bharmal first wife and his mother rani apporva devi were on terrace with other royal ladies of family when they heard voice


tak tak tak --


raj mata purva devi arrogantly asked : 


"yah kon lathi takta chala araha hae binaa anumati"


rani apoorva devi who was purva mother in  law said calmly


  "hum nae shaguni bai ko bulwaya hae "


in the mean time shaguni reached near to ladies sitting area
she was looking for apporva devi
rani sahiba aap na bhi bulati tau shagutni zaroor aatey"... itni bari khushi ki baat aur shagunt na aati ...nhi nhi ...shaguni tau zaroor aati"
all the ladies confused and 
rani purwa devi fumed ... 


"aisa kia shub honay walal hae ...jo ashub aur ashub hona tha hochuka "


"maray sartaj parloke Sudharo gae aur mara sapoot mara gaurav ratan singh is rajaye ka mharaja ban gaya ... ab aisa kia shub honay walat hae"


other women always feel bad and insulted with this proudness of rani purva but they were helpless ...bec they like or not this was truth tht purva devi was queeen mother and most powerfu woman in amer but shaguni bai was not impressd with purva devi rant ...
by compeltely ignoring purva devi shaguni adressed to apporva devi (bharmal mother)


"bhadai ho raaj mata ... "amer kay maharaj K haan laxmi padharne wali hae ... "


all the ladies got astonished and purva deviconfusedly repeat   ..


"laxmi..?"


 " kia matlab hae tumhara ...laxmi..say ?"


than happily


"aray shaguni bai kia maray ratan singh  Kay biyah ka sanket lai ho"


shaguni bai nodded her head in no and replied mockingly 


" nahi purva devi tumharay bete ka lagan  nahi... "


and then looked towards apporva devi 


"Amber ki rajkumari ka janam...haan..."


every one stand up in surprise ...apoorva devi was confused because she called shaguni for maina vati and her child who was still in her womb ...she was clueless what shaguni bai blabbering.


purva devi was still in shock ...she cant beleive her ears what they just heard...


apoorva devi was also confuse .. So she said to shaguni


  " yah kia kah rahi ho shaguni" ... "ham nae tau tumhe  maina..."


after hearing maina name purva devi came in her sences , cut her MIL and start yelling at shaguni bai angerly


 "kia bakwas kar rhi hoo pagal aurat ... dimagh kharab hae tumhara ...maray raja beta ka abhi biyah bhi nhi hua... rajkumari kaise ho sakti hae"


padmavati the first wife of bharmal and mother of bhagwan daas came forward to console her jethani..


padmavati to purva :


 " bhabhi sa aap itna chintat na ho... mainavati ki  beti bhi tau ratan singh ki behan aur amer ki rajkumari hogi ..aap shant ho jaye .." 


apporva devi and other ladies noded their head to support padmavati and console purva devi...


but shaguni didnt care 


she start laughing again


 "aap logo nae jo samajna hae samajh lo ...shaguni nae jo khna tha kah dia ... amer k maharaj k haan rajkumari ka janam honay wala hae"


after hearing this purva devi lost her calm and start yelling 


 "dafa ho jao yaha sae ... sanik , dasiyo ..utha kar bahar phek do is pagal aurat ko"


many guards and servants came and start dragging shaguni bai 
apporva devi got panicked she tried to stop guards ..


 "aray ruk jao ..is ko ham nae bulaya tha... purva bahu ...tanik shaguni bai ko mainavati ko aik baar daikh  tau lene dau kadachit koi bharam hi hoga "


but shaguni started laughing hysterically 


"shaguni nae jo kahna tha kah dia... maharaj kay haan laxmi padharne wali hae,... amer ki rajkumari janam lene wali hae... yahi honi hae aur honi hokar rahegi"


 ... "utha kar bahar phek do is namurad ko ...agay sae yah pagal aurat mahal k aas paas bhi nhi dikhni chahiye"


after ordering this madly , purva devi marched out from there and guards threw shaguni out from the palace

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