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Post by Abavi on 2013-02-18, 08:09

Hi all, I have come back with 3rd OS in the life's moments series. As you all know this series of OS depicts ARHI's life after their wedding, hope you all like it. This one is titled: None like you

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Arnav was near the pool working on his laptop. Kushi who had just then climbed the stairs exclaimed "oh devimaiya" but before he could take a look at her, she ran into their room
"Kushi are you alright?" he called out.
"ha yes..." Kushi replied" Arnav ji you know how to drape a saree?"
"I know how to remove one" he smirked
"Dont joke, I need your help here" Kushi called out

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Post by anurao66 on 2013-02-18, 08:18

Abavi,

Thank you for posting this OS. It was a real cute one and could have been totally believable if they had not changed Arnav's character after marriage. I could really visualize it and I wish such a scene like the Teej fast was included. I really loved it.

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Post by Abavi on 2013-02-18, 08:34

anurao66 wrote:Abavi,

Thank you for posting this OS. It was a real cute one and could have been totally believable if they had not changed Arnav's character after marriage. I could really visualize it and I wish such a scene like the Teej fast was included. I really loved it.
Thanks So much for the feedback Anu... Yeah I too wish they handled the after marraige tracks well..

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Re: ArHi OS: Life's moments- None like you

Post by rrekha on 2013-03-09, 12:28

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Post by shruti46 on 2013-03-10, 17:15

:)

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Re: ArHi OS: Life's moments- None like you

Post by hibyehibye232323 on 2013-05-07, 04:58

heyy loved the preview..can i read further?

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Post by tweety on 2013-05-09, 16:50

i love it :)

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Re: ArHi OS: Life's moments- None like you

Post by yasmina06 on 2013-05-18, 03:33

Hhh

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Post by reth kumar on 2013-07-21, 18:34

haiiiiiiiiiiii............

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Re: ArHi OS: Life's moments- None like you

Post by dilectus on 2013-07-21, 19:11

Only for you I am on this forum abavi..and its so difficult!!! can never find the page where update is!!

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Post by sangavi on 2013-07-23, 21:14

:-)

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Post by mirabelle on 2013-07-28, 14:15

wanna read...

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Post by Deemanthi on 2013-08-02, 16:45

:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Post by AllSmiles86 on 2013-08-02, 18:44

I am happy that there is a website that protects your work without the assault of plagiarism plaguing your mind

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Post by Luvkkgasr on 2013-08-05, 17:48

Dis forum is so confusinggg.. :(

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Post by deepshika nayyer on 2013-08-08, 11:34

Nice

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Post by sim2601 on 2013-08-08, 12:45

nice, like to read please

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Post by priyankasharma on 2013-08-09, 14:26

Read

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Post by rdforfun on 2013-08-19, 05:36

Wink

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Post by Sanjanasoruppu on 2013-08-19, 22:36

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Post by tanviarshi on 2013-08-19, 22:43

Reading..

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Post by Koisk on 2013-08-20, 01:40

Commenting to read..

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Post by shamin1 on 2013-08-20, 05:18

great start sweety:)

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Post by tracy1191 on 2013-08-21, 14:44

lovely

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Post by tachyon on 2013-08-21, 21:36

study run

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