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Post by Abavi on 2013-02-18, 08:58

This is an OS based on accident episode, please read and leave comments I love to read them. This was written after the episode was relayed... so the mindset needs to be at that stage when reading this:)
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"where are they taking the girl?" he stammered, his breath ragged due to running
"Are you related?"
what should he say? how is he related to her?
"I know her" he managed to say
"you know her family?"
"yes, but where are they taking her?"
"To lifeline Hospital.
Arnav began walking towards his car, thinking of an alternate route, He has to be by her side at any cost, he didnt even hear the police man demanding to know the girl's address to inform her family.


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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by anurao66 on 2013-02-18, 09:07

Abhavi,

It is really very fantastic. I really loved it. So nice to read all the os you are posting. It really brings out love Arnav had for Kushi. Whether she knows or not it was indeed very well described by you.

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by Abavi on 2013-02-18, 09:17

anurao66 wrote:Abhavi,

It is really very fantastic. I really loved it. So nice to read all the os you are posting. It really brings out love Arnav had for Kushi. Whether she knows or not it was indeed very well described by you.
Thanks So much Anu... This was all written a long time back... I am reposting it here...

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by anurao66 on 2013-02-18, 09:27

Abhavi,

It was really very good. It does not matter when you have posted it.

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by Abavi on 2013-02-18, 09:33

anurao66 wrote:Abhavi,

It was really very good. It does not matter when you have posted it.

:) Then I am gonna pester you to read all my stories....Wink

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by hkrajan on 2013-02-28, 17:22

and m bck to read some more

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by Abavi on 2013-03-01, 14:26

hkrajan wrote:and m bck to read some more
You are gladly welcome!
Do read and let me know!

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by shruti46 on 2013-03-10, 20:50

:)

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by rrekha on 2013-03-11, 10:15

pls let me read

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by Abavi on 2013-03-11, 10:23

rrekha wrote:pls let me read
You can read now Rekha... I would suggest to res first, read it and then come back and unres the post and leave a comment for me :)

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by dudette12 on 2013-04-09, 21:50

Great one

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by prudent on 2013-05-18, 08:01

:)

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by asma.saleem.96 on 2013-05-23, 20:52

Greeat

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by Jhumki on 2013-06-15, 23:59

:)

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by rieanah on 2013-07-14, 16:00

:)

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by tuttu on 2013-07-15, 20:10

beautiful:flower:

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by varshapan on 2013-07-16, 22:23

Can I read too.. please

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by Ninakhanna on 2013-07-17, 03:16

Arnie going mad for Khushi, is it? Let's see...

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by Ninakhanna on 2013-07-17, 03:18

Sweet :)

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by muskaansobti on 2013-07-17, 07:30

Amazing n awesme ff
I juz lv destiny games....

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by chandugali on 2013-07-19, 03:30

Super cool

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by zeedia on 2013-07-20, 02:27

Res

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by reth kumar on 2013-07-20, 07:26

well i'm not able to read it....

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by A.N.Jell_Zarina on 2013-07-28, 09:51

reading

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Re: ArHi OS: The Accident

Post by sangavi on 2013-07-28, 11:45

:-)

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