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Post by Abavi on 2013-02-18, 09:01

hi all,

This is a short OS on how Kushi gets Arnav to confess that he bought those bangles for her. Read and please leave comments. your comments make me happy and encourage me a lot. This was again written after the episode where Kushi says to Anjali that she didnt like the bangles, as Arnav stands there fuming, was aired
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"Did you get me these bangles?"

Kushi looked at him as he left the room avoiding her question. Kushi knew that he was the one who got her the bangles, but she wanted him to say it out


"I shall make him confess" she told herself.



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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by Nehaarshi on 2013-03-02, 15:53

I wanna read!!!

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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by win7 on 2013-03-02, 16:03

I love this episode, this scene, everything. Please continue writing and can u pm me when you complete it?

edit: now i get. Its hidden. Open saseme.

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Post by win7 on 2013-03-02, 16:11

Love it. "What else are you planning to remove khushi?" Embarassed
Now you've thoughts and images in my mind.Evil or Very Mad

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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by Abavi on 2013-03-03, 17:48

Nehaarshi wrote:I wanna read!!!
Haa.. simple Neha, you can already read it... You need to comment once to read it as it is hidden...
Do read and leave comments...

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Post by Abavi on 2013-03-03, 17:49

win7 wrote:Love it. "What else are you planning to remove khushi?" Embarassed
Now you've thoughts and images in my mind.Evil or Very Mad
Haa,,that was the idea:twisted:

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Post by Abavi on 2013-03-03, 17:50

win7 wrote:I love this episode, this scene, everything. Please continue writing and can u pm me when you complete it?

edit: now i get. Its hidden. Open saseme.
Good you found that it was hidden[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]

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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by fire.whisky on 2013-03-04, 11:17

Wonderfulwa hai jee!

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Post by rrekha on 2013-03-05, 12:05

i wanna read it

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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by Abavi on 2013-03-05, 16:40

rrekha wrote:i wanna read it
hey Rekha. welcome to my story, you will be able to read it now! :)

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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by shruti46 on 2013-03-10, 20:16

abavi i m loving al ur stories,..... :)

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Post by Abavi on 2013-03-11, 10:38

shruti46 wrote:abavi i m loving al ur stories,..... :)
Thanks a lot Shruti

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Post by shruti46 on 2013-03-11, 10:48

hey...plz update magic called LOVE too.....i m loving ipkknd even more now after reading your stories...
i love your stories..... :heart:
huh why i am so bad at writing :cry:

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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by Abavi on 2013-03-11, 10:55

shruti46 wrote:hey...plz update magic called LOVE too.....i m loving ipkknd even more now after reading your stories...
i love your stories..... :heart:
huh why i am so bad at writing :cry:
No one is bad at writing Shruti... You will never know the writer hidden inside you until you start writing... I can myself see how much I have improved from what I was when I started writing... I am sure you would be better than what I was when I started writing :)

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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by Maria J on 2013-03-29, 01:34

TFS

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Post by Maria J on 2013-03-29, 01:38

Loved it

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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by asdfjkl;2 on 2013-04-15, 17:39

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Post by Sanjanasoruppu on 2013-04-18, 10:10

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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by rieanah on 2013-04-28, 00:43

:)

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Post by tweety on 2013-04-30, 12:21

i waana read it!!

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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by indcath101 on 2013-04-30, 21:19

loved it .. :lol!:

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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by Gangsu on 2013-07-18, 19:30

:)

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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by Gangsu on 2013-07-18, 19:39

Vry nce update

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Post by reth kumar on 2013-07-21, 11:16

yaar tum yeh animated photos kaha se lagate ho....

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Re: ArHi OS: The Mystery of Bangles

Post by tanviarshi on 2013-07-21, 12:29

Reading..

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