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Post by Abavi on 2013-02-18, 09:05

Author's note:

Ok so here is one more OS.. on the current Sheetal track...I dont know if it is good enough... I am not quiet satisfied..but I had to get it out of my system... Hope you all like it. Do comment and let me know what you think... and please do not copy or reproduce my work without my prior permission or without giving me my due credit .. and one more thing.. this is an OS and will remain as one.. I am not continuing it [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]

Happy reading...

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OS: An Outsider


"You fasted for Arnavji" Kushi accused sheetal
"No, you have misunderstood.. Why should I fast? that too for Arnav?" Sheetal argued
"Misunderstanding? you call this a misunderstanding?" Kushi called back shoving the report in her face.


Sheetal's face lost its colour. She looked timidly back at Kushi, while Kushi continued...

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by rrekha on 2013-03-09, 12:15

wanna read it

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by dudette12 on 2013-04-24, 03:15

Nice

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by Aneesahkhaliq on 2013-04-27, 21:01

I'd love to read this please
I'ce signed up xD

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by Linsha on 2013-05-01, 00:11

Wink

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by Chandu2000 on 2013-06-04, 01:08

How can I read this?

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by Ammu_123 on 2013-06-05, 16:43

How can I read this

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by Grockks on 2013-07-20, 00:14

Nice

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by muskaansobti on 2013-07-20, 01:03

Niice

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by barbiegurl on 2013-07-20, 02:22


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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by sangavi on 2013-07-22, 19:29

:-)

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by starcrossed on 2013-07-26, 00:11

Hmm

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by tanviarshi on 2013-07-26, 20:55

Reading...

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by asyakabhiarhisarun on 2013-07-27, 00:25

super

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by hari93 on 2013-07-27, 05:37



That was AMAZING.....!!! Thumbsup 
Loved it...


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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by vasudha on 2013-07-27, 07:06

:)

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by A.N.Jell_Zarina on 2013-07-28, 09:56

wnt to read

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by Deemanthi on 2013-08-05, 10:04

:) :) :) :) :) :)

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by deepshika nayyer on 2013-08-08, 14:28

Want to read it

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read

Post by priyankasharma on 2013-08-09, 06:58

Well the preview sounds interesting n I wanna read it further

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review

Post by priyankasharma on 2013-08-09, 07:17

Wow u presented the situation in such a different way then the original track . I loved the mature way in which things Angeles situations were handled and well its my first where I have read of sheetal not being a negative character

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by rdforfun on 2013-08-19, 05:22

:)

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by tachyon on 2013-08-21, 23:53

Wink

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by swethaj on 2013-08-22, 00:58

:P

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Re: Arhi OS: An Outsider

Post by sfghfj on 2013-09-23, 17:43

good one

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