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Jodha Akbar Written Update 18 Nov14 "AkDha &Salim In Fatima Bi's hut"

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-11-17, 12:05

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The episode begins with .... Jalal's hojra .. where  Jodha is requesting jalal for permission to meet Salim
Jajal refuses .. as he fears Salim will become weak in his resolution
Jo then goes out of Palace to visit temple and distribute alms amongst poor ...


Jalal visits Salim's village  in disguise ....khane khana  is there in disguise too
Jalal says he was not getting peace of mind unless he saw his son
he secretly observes Salim
right that moment Salim has a fall and cries with pain
jalal feels emotional
Khane khana asks jalal to go away as he too will become emotional and weaken ...


Salim goes to forest to collect fire wood ....as he is returning he over hears from some villagers that there was going to be distribution of alms blankets and food to every one at temple
salim thinks that he too would get some food for fatima bi from temple

At temple JOdha is distributing alms happily ... al thank and praise MUZ

Salim sees a huge crowd .. he notices his ammi distributing fod, clothes , money etc
salim forwards his hands
Jodha is shocked to see two little hands covered with bruises .. she offers to apply
Next moment Jodha is shocked as she  and salim come face to face
Salim is shocked to see his ammi jaan....
jodha is in tears 'salim tells her " salaam begum sahiba
the poor beggar is hungry give some food please"

Jodha aplieslep on the little hands .. Tearfully ...
jodha is in tears as the boy leaves ... . She gives him a leaf plate full of food
Salim rushes away from there ...jo notices that salim does not eat but take the plate for his old granny in the hut
he carries a bundle of wood in one arm and blanket n food in other hand  

jodha tells Maan singh that she wanted to see salim in the hut .. but maan singh refuses to allow Jo to visit Salim's hut

salim reaches hut .. fatima bi is happy that salim returned with food and blanket
Fatima bi is surprised and asks where from did he get them ??
he tells fatima bi that MUZ was distributing food and blankets he got then from there ..

JOdha secretly reaches Salim's hut .. he watches the heart rending scene of poverty and the overwhelming scene love and affection between Salim n fatima bi
fatima bi feeds her grand child with her hands

jodha rushes out from there as khane khana notices her there out side fatima's hut

Back at the palace Jo apologises to Jalal for visiting salim .. not meeting him just looking at him
jala tells her that she had broken his rule
jalal confesses to her that shehenshah too had broken a rule... as he too had gone to see his son secretly
jodha then praises his correct decision in sending salim to the hut
she had seen how responsible salim had become
she was proud of jalal for taking strong curel decision
jalal replies that he was relieved and happy to hear this
they bot miss salim .. they talk how they would take their son in their arms and hug him once he returned back .. how they would chat n play with salim
Jodha jalal have eyelock .. smile lovingly .. jalal hugs Jodha tightly ... lovingly ...tearfully .. both missing salim ...


at Salim's hut .. he is sleeping on the floor while Fatima is sleeping on the khatiya ..
he is unable to sleep .. he misses his mother Jodha .. he misses her bed time stories ..

back at palace in Jodha 's hojra Jo is sleeping on the floor thinking of Salim and hugging his tiny clothes ..missing him ...
she goes to kanha .. requests kanha to passon he stories to salim
elsewhere jalal is in disguise moving around in the crowds .. in fatima's village keeping an eye on every one
khane khana tells jala to go back nn rest but he replies that it was his duty to protect waliyahad .. from enemies


precap Jalal suspects enemy attack , tells maan singh and khane khana to be vigilant  and next scene Salim is surrounded by unknown attackers
he shouts ....Who are you ??
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hpee
scratch scratch scratch scratch


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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 18 Nov14 "AkDha &Salim In Fatima Bi's hut"

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-11-18, 19:32

Hope its interesting today

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 18 Nov14 "AkDha &Salim In Fatima Bi's hut"

Post by Nirra on 2014-11-18, 19:34

Yup manu little boring i hope writer make great story xixoxo

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 18 Nov14 "AkDha &Salim In Fatima Bi's hut"

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-11-18, 20:14

Nirra wrote:Yup manu little boring i hope writer make great story xixoxo

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 18 Nov14 "AkDha &Salim In Fatima Bi's hut"

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-11-18, 21:42

Nice episode

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 18 Nov14 "AkDha &Salim In Fatima Bi's hut"

Post by Nanayaa623 on 2014-11-18, 22:45

Manu, thanks for the live update! long hug


Looks like CV team trying to up their house in order but still the storyline is not good enough. 

Anyways since in their world evil wins over good all the time lets she the end of it though I doubt they have the quality to end it well too. 

It is either forgotten in the middle and another track stared or it comes to an end with all the question not answered properly.

How come with such security and spies around Jalal the King doesn't know about Ruky visit against his orders?  Hmm Shocked Shocked Shocked  I think all CV team have to do now is give Ruky a broom to make her status official( she fly in and out of Agra palace as an invisible being) hpee  How creative!

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 18 Nov14 "AkDha &Salim In Fatima Bi's hut"

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-11-18, 22:59

Nanayaa623 wrote:Manu, thanks for the live update! long hug


Looks like CV team trying to up their house in order but still the storyline is not good enough. 

Anyways since in their world evil wins over good all the time lets she the end of it though I doubt they have the quality to end it well too. 

It is either forgotten in the middle and another track stared or it comes to an end with all the question not answered properly.

How come with such security and spies around Jalal the King doesn't know about Ruky visit against his orders?  Hmm Shocked Shocked Shocked  I think all CV team have to do now is give Ruky a broom to make her status official( she fly in and out of Agra palace as an invisible being) hpee  How creative!

Jalal and his spies have selective vision .. Only those whp miss out enemy movements and unable to see jodha's escapades .. And turn blind eye to ruku moving about in full jewellery at night out of the palace are selcted to be guards
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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 18 Nov14 "AkDha &Salim In Fatima Bi's hut"

Post by Tanthya on 2014-11-18, 23:43

Does Akbar even visit his court?

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 18 Nov14 "AkDha &Salim In Fatima Bi's hut"

Post by Nirra on 2014-11-19, 01:57

So manu. In this episode salim hates jodha right? Poor jodha

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 18 Nov14 "AkDha &Salim In Fatima Bi's hut"

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-11-19, 02:03

Nirra wrote:So manu. In this episode salim hates jodha right? Poor jodha
Jodha was overwhelmed to see Salim so near her .... She was in tears ti see his bruised little hands ... She just wanted to caress him ... Yet Salim remembered the cruel words of Ruku ..and moved back
His mind has been effectively poisoned by Ruku
Evil or Very Mad

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 18 Nov14 "AkDha &Salim In Fatima Bi's hut"

Post by Nirra on 2014-11-19, 02:43

I hope cant be long manu, and salim realised that his mother loving him so much :(

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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 18 Nov14 "AkDha &Salim In Fatima Bi's hut"

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-11-19, 02:53

Nirra wrote:I hope cant be long manu, and salim realised that his mother loving him so much :(
I think in actual history Ruku hot him addicted to opium and alcoholic drinks
... So as long as Salim stays in Fatima bi's hut ...it is better for Salim ... He is away from Ruku's devious plans
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Re: Jodha Akbar Written Update 18 Nov14 "AkDha &Salim In Fatima Bi's hut"

Post by --sumana13-- on 2014-11-19, 10:26

Nanayaa623 wrote:Manu, thanks for the live update! long hug


Looks like CV team trying to up their house in order but still the storyline is not good enough. 

Anyways since in their world evil wins over good all the time lets she the end of it though I doubt they have the quality to end it well too. 

It is either forgotten in the middle and another track stared or it comes to an end with all the question not answered properly.

How come with such security and spies around Jalal the King doesn't know about Ruky visit against his orders?  Hmm Shocked Shocked Shocked  I think all CV team have to do now is give Ruky a broom to make her status official( she fly in and out of Agra palace as an invisible being) hpee  How creative!
Giving Ruku a broom !! OMGEE thats the only thing left in witchifying the devious Ruku
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