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Post by sarra0 on 2013-05-20, 11:39

Joh mere aankhoon mein sab ko dikhai detey hain
Woh mein kyun nahin la sakta Zubaan par
Joh mein tumhare liye mehsoos karta hoon
Woh mein kyun nahin la sakta Zubaan par
Woh joh raaz nahin hukay bhi ek  raaz hain
Woh mein kyun nahin la sakta Zubaan par
Woh joh mein tere Aankhon mein bhi dekh sakta hoon
Phir yeh Lafz kehne kyun hain itne mushkal

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Re: QH - Asad Ahmed Khan

Post by Tanthya on 2013-05-20, 12:10

Try Speech Therapy !!

Sarra jaan,Beautifully written ..
loved the last 2 lines esp . I can see it in ur eyes too Line ..Muhwazzz for tht

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Re: QH - Asad Ahmed Khan

Post by slmu on 2013-05-20, 12:32

Sarra, awesome poem :)

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Re: QH - Asad Ahmed Khan

Post by sarra0 on 2013-05-20, 12:37

Tanthya wrote:Try Speech Therapy !!

Sarra jaan,Beautifully written ..
loved the last 2 lines esp . I can see it in ur eyes too Line ..Muhwazzz for tht

Thanks Tants, i didn't think it was very well written but i thou if I wrote it u have to suffer it, but i liked the last two lines myself.

:lol!: his mum tried speech therapy it came out worse wen he tried to speak, she already has said quite a few school nahin hain, Asad is afraid if he opens him mouth then he will suffer the same fate.

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Re: QH - Asad Ahmed Khan

Post by sarra0 on 2013-05-20, 12:39

slmu wrote:Sarra, awesome poem :)

long hug thanks shanti

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Re: QH - Asad Ahmed Khan

Post by Hades on 2013-05-20, 13:05

Nicely expressed ..

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Re: QH - Asad Ahmed Khan

Post by anurao66 on 2013-05-20, 14:43

Sarra,

It was beautiful. You wrote really well. I simply loved it.

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Re: QH - Asad Ahmed Khan

Post by clarissasham on 2013-05-20, 14:48

superb poem on asad i think u love him
afro

but for me he is akdoo ahmed khan :lol!:

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Re: QH - Asad Ahmed Khan

Post by sarra0 on 2013-05-21, 11:43

Zoyakisoya wrote:Nicely expressed ..

Thanks

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Re: QH - Asad Ahmed Khan

Post by sarra0 on 2013-05-21, 11:44

anurao66 wrote:Sarra,

It was beautiful. You wrote really well. I simply loved it.

Aw thanks Anu long hug u r always so encouraging

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